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That was great! I loved it! I can\'t for the next chapter! So please update soon!

The chapter was great! I LOVE Luna and how you made her so observant. That\'s always how I\'ve pictured her! Update soon!

I usually try to wait and review at the end of a story, but just to let you know really quick- you have Snape saying \'expelliarmus\' instead of \'legilimens\' in this chapter (number 6). Just something you might want to consider fixing, I had to read the sentence a couple more times before I realized what was going on. ^_^ I\'m absolutely adoring the story so far, and I\'m preparing to go down on one knee to ask for Harry to be the sure-thing top in the HD relationship, but I\'ll write more after I read the next chapter. Love it!



~Hazel

Your storyline is good but it\'s really slow moving. Is this supposed to become Harry/Draco? It doesn\'t really seem like it since this is chapter 7 and no sign of Draco at all. Maybe it\'s not realistic to have them fall in love with each other 5 minutes after deciding not to be rivals any more but waiting countless chapters before they even see each other and start talking can make a story kind of tedious. (sorry I\'m one of those with a short attention span and prefer that they at least start talking and becoming friends in the first few paragraphs) Please don\'t get upset or angry. I don\'t mean to be insulting because this has the makings of a really good story.

Cool story!!! keep writing I am glad Harry is going to stop living up to (or not) to everyones expectations. They are holding him back. Liked the birthday presents I think the book Neville gave him will be the most useful once he knows more about the wizarding world he will be better off and not \"blindsided\" so often. The other gifts were great too those were more \"fun gifts\" which are just as important and \"valuable\" coming from friends. Update again soon

great story, add more!

Oh this was great. Harry got to have a good time with some friends. That was awesome. They are starting to form his core group now, hmmm?

Awww, this story is great. I love the new improved Harry, and i can\'t wait to hopefully hear about some of the sketches he\'s drawn...
Can\'t wait for the next chapter... chow for now!

That was so cute! I love Luna, she\'s so awesome! At least Harry has some real friends who care about him...*takes out shotgun and shoots Ron in the leg and scampers away, giggling madly* PLease update soon!

Instead of contacts why not get them fixed? Oh I can\'t wait for chapter 8! More please!