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Bwahaha... you build up tension like a dam. :-P I love this fic (you write very well) and I can\'t wait to read what happens next... lol... some priceless reaction is in this fic\'s future...

ACK! talk about a freakin cliffie!! can we say \"GRRRR\"?

Why did you change it?!? I liked the other chapter better. It may have been a bit rushed but at least it wasn\'t drug out until the fic was to boring to read anymore. Don\'t get me wrong I like a long fic as much as the next person but sometimes they are just too long and get boring. This new chapter it ok and everything but I don\'t really like it as well as the other one. You shouldn\'t change your fic or way of writing the characters just because of one review. I know it can be a downer when someone doesn\'t really like the story or chapter but look at all those that did/do!!! In the end I do hope you are writing for yourself not change your story/chapters because of a reviewer that probably hasn\'t posted/written anything. I would like to see them do better. But since you changed it... I will tell you the chapter was ok but I can\'t wait to get to the smut between Draco/Harry

Yay! ^_^ I like it. *bribes you with cookies so you\'ll write more.*

Hey,

I really love your story. It\'s simple in writing style and really good. It gets the message across.

Can I ask one question? Don\'t worry I always ask this question to every H/D story I read. Is this a Submissive Draco? I really love them, submissive Draco yet at the same time he has his fire and attitude. A Dominant Harry can handle him and he really looks hot when he is.

I really do hope it is that way inclinde, but those stories are rather hard to come by. Anywho, whoever is sub or dom, the story is still great and I\'m looking forward to reading more.

If it\'s possible, can I get emailed when there\'s another update? I can never keep track of stories I read in this site, I always forget and then remember years later. So I\'d really like to be able to keep up to date with this story. But if it\'s not able to be done I understand and I hope I remember to keep an eye out for the update.

So anywho. Great story and I can\'t wait for more. Till then. Cya!

Need chapter 5! What happens next? I need to know!

Ugh! Your cliffies are killin\' me!! Great stuff though, keep up the good work!!

I don\'t know about the first version, but I enjoyed this chapter. I\'m all held in suspense. -ignpre spelling :P

Super good chapter! I guess I didn\'t read the last version for some reason, but I felt like this was good. I liked Hermione telling Harry to stop being a wuss! It\'s always so irritating when people dilly-dally around instead of facing their issues! UPDATE SOON!

The was too rushed in my opinion, and you made Harry seem TOO wimpy and submissive, and Draco too mean and dominant. It was like you were trying to overplay their characters, their personalities. Draco Malfoy, in all honesty isnt as malicious as people make him in fics....he\'s just a rich Daddy\'s Boy who gets childish tantrums if things dont go his way. So, no, not to be mean but the ending was too rushed and not as good as it could have been. The rest of the fic was fine up until the end. The end made it all fall through and pretty much lackluster...boring really. I think as a writer you could have done better on the ending.