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for The Prince in Exile

by Veresna

person Brooke
schedule December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
PERFECTION. And most inspiring, I must say...
Fabulous dialogue, flawlessly paced.
person Dark Lily Flower
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
An exquisite story! Veresna really enriches Severus - please don't stop! I am so looking forward to the sequel with Bellatrix... All your work is fantastic.
person tamargrl
schedule August 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story. So well written. Just perfect. And Snape is totoally believable, as is the situation. Just really well crafted and such a good story idea, too. Bravo!
person Sea
schedule August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story...very true to our beloved Snape!
person Crystal_Quill
schedule August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent evaluation of Snape post-HBP. I\'m sure he\'s never been loyal to either the Order
or Voldemort; he\'s only loyal to himself, as you state some Death Eaters beleive. I liked
his manipulative ways, very much on character.
person Domino
schedule August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good story, my dear, good story. I\'ve read many of your pieces, and you\'ve much improved and matured in your writing style since your first. I hope you can do something stunning with the rather disheartening situation JK Rowling has put to Snape and, as well, Snape-fans everywhere. I almost cried when Severus turned. I had expected Dumbledore\'s death, but not Snape\'s betrayl, and as much as I would like to think that Snape was only playing Death Eater because he had to, for the good of the Order, and all other altruistic posibillities, I can\'t quite make myself believe it. Good luck with the story; I\'ll be sure to check back frequently.
person Blipo
schedule August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another Amzing story!!!

You are truly amazing!

person alittlekneazle
schedule August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story! I love your writing style. You paint a tantilizing picture. What a twisted and devious SOB Snape is. But didn\'t we know that about him any ways. I cant wait to read more. Please keep writing.
person jkk
schedule August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
How lucky am I? I had just finished all your other works when you posted this new story today. It gives me something to look forward to, even if I am a little disturbed by Narcissa visiting him. Loved the entire description about McG, and the bit about Voldemort\'s jealousy was fascinating. I hadn\'t ever thought about it, but you are surely correct that he would envy Snape for doing what he could not. I\'m interested to see how you are going to handle this post-HBP Snape.