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August 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Woo Hoo! You update. It was so great. Keep it up plz.
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August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
long time no read. glad you decided to update. I love this story so get the next chapter up soon plz.
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August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ooooooooooooo I lou this story. Keep it up girlfriend.
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August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You really love leaving things at cliff hangers, don't you? however, i definatly like, nice twist to the events. should be good to see what happens to older snape. thanks so much for updating, now all i have to do is wait for the next one ;)
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August 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What's up with all the 'her's? No females in the chapter.
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August 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, yiota does have a point. Like I said in the e-mail, I could beta for you. That way I could make the story even better.
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August 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Evil person!
short, need to update quicker!
short, need to update quicker!
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August 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
THANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOU!!!! I'm so glad you heard me out and wrote the next chapter. Oh I can't wait until you get the next one up. It makes me so happy to know that you didn't forget about this story. *Dropping down on her knees* Just please don't wait another six months to write the next chapter.
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July 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You are evil, EVIL! Six months, come on. I've even sent you an e-mail on how evil you are. Not really, just begging you to finish the story.
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July 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Arg! So many tense changes it's ridiculous! You say 'He smiles and nodded.' No, no, no! If he nods in the past then he smiles in the past as well. That should be 'He smiles and nodded.'
You really need to work on your grammar.
You really need to work on your grammar.