AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for Sing for Me, Cry for Me

by famlia

person myniephoenix
schedule August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice beginning... i look forward to an update with the actions lucius is spurred to.. :)
person penny
schedule August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh please oh please put in proper spacing. Its all clumped together and I keep losing my place.
person Storm
schedule August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So far it seems very interesting and The summary seems promising. Hope you continue this. Keep up the good work
person Sora Jr
schedule August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great story I think it\'s a great start for the story. I hope you can update soon because i really like it.