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person AUDRY
schedule September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok now im begging you pliz update
person the best reader
schedule September 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey im sorry for before i was really harsh. I just thoght that maybe if someone was a little mean then you would review to prove that you wern\'t any of the things i called you. anyways pliz review fast.
person audry
schedule September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey its me again and i mit have used a diff. E-mail, but w/e. anywho i 4real need u to finish this story or update/add something pliz im like dieing i told u allready i dont like to wait so keep working hard,but like speed up or something. And thanx for reading


luv ya/chow
audry
person best reader ever
schedule September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey when the hell are you going to update. I\'ve been checking every single day sense i finished what is already up there. You are a great authur but your not showing it very well. your acking like a jackass to all of us who cant wait for the further chapters.
I am like the biggset harry potter freak ever, and these fan fiction stories are what keeps me bussy between books of the real harry potter world. so pliz update soon so far so good and if you dont soon i\'ll just keep doing this and my name calling will get worse.


luv ya lots, the best reader ever
person AJ
schedule September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! Please update soon, I am dying to know what happens!
person Sarah
schedule September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
SPIFFY SPIFFY SPIFFY SPIFFY SPIFFY! THIS STORY IS SOOOO GOOD! Wow Sanpe almost seems nice.... whats he upto? Have you read the half blood prince? If u have you know why it\'s difficult to see Snape in the same light anymore, but i still like your story a whole bunch. Please update ASAP.
sincerely,
Sarah B.
person LaLa
schedule September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A very lovely story. Please update soon. I want to read the results for each potion.
person audry
schedule September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey i really like ur story i think its great. and to all the peps who dont like fuck u and if u dont like then dont read it really isnt that hard. any who pliz add chapters. and soon im dying to know wat happens next. Im the reader that doesnt like to wait. Also u no how u said that people that r raped dont always break down? thats true and i no from first hand eaxperince. At first i did but then i bruoght my self back up. and to any one that has been raped or molested pliz E-mail me or im me. my screen name is DarkAngleCU. and again pliz up date and keep up the good work. Also i think its cute that there falling in love!!!!!!!!! ^_^
person Katie
schedule September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am so confused in chapter 4...i couldnt even read on. I had to comment. How did she know? thats really confusing. Im sorry...good chapter but needs to be better explained how she found out.
person Silver_Eyes (not signed in)
schedule September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think it was well within my rights to delete finn\'s comments and not my own because Finn\'s were very offensive to me and my reveiwers, irrelevent to the story and non-constructive, wheras mine were polite and I didn\'t resort to needless name calling. I kept Finn\'s second set up because they were polite and expressed a valid opinion without being insulting. I will only ever delete flames which are assuming and rude.

Silver_Eyes