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August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked it.
So he does like her and he was caught, Blaise could tell.
Can\'t wait for more
So he does like her and he was caught, Blaise could tell.
Can\'t wait for more
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August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i hope they get all this fixedamd she will let him woo her ... i justy love it sooo please update soon and well in till next time keep ypu the great work later
angel
angel
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August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I personally know what a horrible situation rape is but that doesn\'t make your story bad. It is a good well worded piece & I will continue to read it and support you to the very end.
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August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Blaise wasn\'t that good of an actor.
Great Part
Great Part
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August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooh, nice......
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August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Re: A/N to Finn
\"This is a fictional story and to be honest its mine so I can do what I like.\"
True. Not arguing with that, but if you\'re going to put your stuff out there, be prepared for people to react in different ways. I have to admit that after reading this A/N, I thought... hmm, maybe I was too harsh, but when I went to re-read what I had wrote, I noticed that my remarks had been removed (though not the few that had responded). So, wow... you\'re free to post whatever you like, but I\'m not free to post a response in the open review book?
\"Secondly if you yourself have ever been a victim of rape or, you know someone that has then i truly feel for you, but how dare you suggest that victims of rape will generally mis-treat a resulting child because I KNOW from first hand experience that it isn\'t true!\"
I have been a victim, and thanks for the \"feel\"ings and if the way I worded my remarks implied that all victims who keep the child who is the result of an attack will mistreat him or her, that\'s not what I meant... but I can\'t very well go back and see what I said now can I? But if you look at statistics, many mothers of children of rape often misdirect whatever feelings and fears and anger they have about the attack towards that child which is constant reminder. I know this b/c in the course of my recovery, I became a peer counselor for other victims of rape. That is not to say that happy families cannot result from these horrible incidents. That is not what I meant to say, and if that is how I worded it, I apologize.
\"If you feel so strongly about the subject of rape then you really shouldn\'t be reading this fic now should you?\"
Um, I give many fics a chance on this site that I don\'t continue with and this is just one of them, but seeing as thought this is the Internet and an open site, I can write whatever I feel at the time about what I had read. I have read many stories here that deal with the subject of rape and many of them handle it in a responsible way. I\'m not offended by fictionalizing a tragedy like rape. I\'m offended by the implication that she and her rapist are going to fall in love. My reaction, by my own admission, was a knee-jerk response towards your fic b/c it happened to be one I was reading after encountering a long line of \"Draco rapes Hermione stories and they fall in love\"- a story line that I usually just silently back away from when I find it. I\'m sorry that you got the brunt of my frustration. I know this is fiction.
\"and I\'m very sorry that I didn\'t make Hermione a shattered broken soul? is that what you wanted?\"
No. I myself am not shattered, nor broken but we are talking about hours (days?) since she realized she\'d been attacked? My problem is not with her reaction thus far, anyway... it is with the fact that it is clear where you are (ulitimately) taking this- Draco and Hermione and children who are the result of a viscous and humiliating act make a family. It\'s unfair to judge your story by what may come next, I admit. But again, you got the brunt of my frustration with fics of this ilk. I shouldn\'t have made it personal.
\"I havent changed my mind in continuing to update this fic\"
Never asked you to stop. It\'s a free country and I like the First Amendment... I would like to think that I can luxuriate in it\'s promise of freedom of speech as well without you deleting these remarks too. Rather hypocritical wouldn\'t you say?
\"and I\'m sure you will find MANY other fic\'s on this site with very similar story lines including the aptly named \'Consequences\' sequel to \'Last resort\'.\"
I haven\'t read your examples and therefore cannot comment.
\"To my other reveiwers thankyou very very much for your reveiws and sorry you had to put up with this little rant :) \"
I\'m sure they appreciate it.
Now, while I can\'t believe I spent so much time doing this, I have one final thing to say. While my pride, though anonymous, wouldn\'t allow me to just let this pass without clarifying comments I made while ranting, I hope you do continue with your story... I hope those enjoying it continue to do so and I will no longer bother you.
What I do hope is that you don\'t take this down. As I said above, I think its rather hypocritical to take down my remarks b/c you didn\'t like what I had to say (the 14 yearold comment... implications of brain sickness aside... I resort to name calling rarely), though I know how I can be when I type first and think later. Yes, you can post whatever you have written here. But this little review button I see below here says that I can as well. Whatever you choose to do, you won\'t have to hear from me again.
Good luck.
\"This is a fictional story and to be honest its mine so I can do what I like.\"
True. Not arguing with that, but if you\'re going to put your stuff out there, be prepared for people to react in different ways. I have to admit that after reading this A/N, I thought... hmm, maybe I was too harsh, but when I went to re-read what I had wrote, I noticed that my remarks had been removed (though not the few that had responded). So, wow... you\'re free to post whatever you like, but I\'m not free to post a response in the open review book?
\"Secondly if you yourself have ever been a victim of rape or, you know someone that has then i truly feel for you, but how dare you suggest that victims of rape will generally mis-treat a resulting child because I KNOW from first hand experience that it isn\'t true!\"
I have been a victim, and thanks for the \"feel\"ings and if the way I worded my remarks implied that all victims who keep the child who is the result of an attack will mistreat him or her, that\'s not what I meant... but I can\'t very well go back and see what I said now can I? But if you look at statistics, many mothers of children of rape often misdirect whatever feelings and fears and anger they have about the attack towards that child which is constant reminder. I know this b/c in the course of my recovery, I became a peer counselor for other victims of rape. That is not to say that happy families cannot result from these horrible incidents. That is not what I meant to say, and if that is how I worded it, I apologize.
\"If you feel so strongly about the subject of rape then you really shouldn\'t be reading this fic now should you?\"
Um, I give many fics a chance on this site that I don\'t continue with and this is just one of them, but seeing as thought this is the Internet and an open site, I can write whatever I feel at the time about what I had read. I have read many stories here that deal with the subject of rape and many of them handle it in a responsible way. I\'m not offended by fictionalizing a tragedy like rape. I\'m offended by the implication that she and her rapist are going to fall in love. My reaction, by my own admission, was a knee-jerk response towards your fic b/c it happened to be one I was reading after encountering a long line of \"Draco rapes Hermione stories and they fall in love\"- a story line that I usually just silently back away from when I find it. I\'m sorry that you got the brunt of my frustration. I know this is fiction.
\"and I\'m very sorry that I didn\'t make Hermione a shattered broken soul? is that what you wanted?\"
No. I myself am not shattered, nor broken but we are talking about hours (days?) since she realized she\'d been attacked? My problem is not with her reaction thus far, anyway... it is with the fact that it is clear where you are (ulitimately) taking this- Draco and Hermione and children who are the result of a viscous and humiliating act make a family. It\'s unfair to judge your story by what may come next, I admit. But again, you got the brunt of my frustration with fics of this ilk. I shouldn\'t have made it personal.
\"I havent changed my mind in continuing to update this fic\"
Never asked you to stop. It\'s a free country and I like the First Amendment... I would like to think that I can luxuriate in it\'s promise of freedom of speech as well without you deleting these remarks too. Rather hypocritical wouldn\'t you say?
\"and I\'m sure you will find MANY other fic\'s on this site with very similar story lines including the aptly named \'Consequences\' sequel to \'Last resort\'.\"
I haven\'t read your examples and therefore cannot comment.
\"To my other reveiwers thankyou very very much for your reveiws and sorry you had to put up with this little rant :) \"
I\'m sure they appreciate it.
Now, while I can\'t believe I spent so much time doing this, I have one final thing to say. While my pride, though anonymous, wouldn\'t allow me to just let this pass without clarifying comments I made while ranting, I hope you do continue with your story... I hope those enjoying it continue to do so and I will no longer bother you.
What I do hope is that you don\'t take this down. As I said above, I think its rather hypocritical to take down my remarks b/c you didn\'t like what I had to say (the 14 yearold comment... implications of brain sickness aside... I resort to name calling rarely), though I know how I can be when I type first and think later. Yes, you can post whatever you have written here. But this little review button I see below here says that I can as well. Whatever you choose to do, you won\'t have to hear from me again.
Good luck.
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August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OHHHHHHH.........I LOVED THIS CHAPTER. HA, I WAS RIGHT,ONCE, AGAIN, HERMIONE\'S HAVING TWINS. I WONDER WHAT DRACO\'S GOING TO DO TO BLAISE. KIND OF FUNNY HE GOT DISCOVERED. NOBODY COULD FOOL ,HERMIONE. I THINK IT\'S GOING TO TAKE A LITTLE TIME, BEFORE HERMIONE FOGIVES DRACO. I FEEL KIND OF SAD FOR HIM, WHEN HE STARTED ALMOST CRYING, HE HAS NEVER BEING SHOWN LOVE. I THINK HERMIONE IS GOING TO LET HIM SEE HIS CHILDREN, AFTER IT TAKES TWO TO TANGO. *GRINS EVILLY*
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August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HA AHAHAHAHAHAHAH HAHAHAHHAHAHAHA.............THAT......WAS FUNNY. GOOD FOR HERMIONE. YAY FOR ME I GOT THE ANSWER WRITE, DRACO DID SLEPT WITH PANSY. WHICH GUY WOULDN\'T TO GET JUST \"P\". KEEP UPDATING LOVE YOUR STORY. I W0NDER WHY IS BLAISE NEEDED. I DON\'T THINK HE WILL HARM HERMIONE.
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August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It will be nice if draco tries to send blaise to help him and blaise falls in love with her. Meaning he will do anything for her, and not harm her. I bet draco will be jealous when he sees them together. I definetely agree with sommer.
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August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hermione will probably find him shagging pansy. sluty pug face. I can\'t wait to his face, know that hermione remembers. what is he going to do, can\'t wait to see the look on his face.