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person Blipo
schedule August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Finn, I\'m sorry for taking your reveiw down and I agree it was hypocritical of me.

but like you I reacted out of anger.

I am very sorry if my story offends you.

Silver_Eyes
person JTBJAB
schedule August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really hate it when people get on their bloody high horse and start shouting a story down - I mean if they hate it so much, or disagree with such venom- stop reading the blasted thing, but leave the author and the readers who are enjoying the story in peace!

I have been attacked, and yes it was upsetting, but I saw myself through it, and had great friends who helped me - AND I NEVER BROKE DOWN, I stayed as strong as I normally was, and people who weren\'t there at the time (it was at a party) never knew, and still don\'t know. Not even my family.

So if you haven\'t experienced something like this, stop inferring that it is offensive - cause it isn\'t!

Personally I love this story, and I feel it is closely related to how some people cope with rape. Yes some break down, and yes they might find this story offensive, but bloody hell leave the rest of us in peace!

Sorry this is more of a rant then a review, but I hate it when people flame for no valid reason other than their own tastes \"don\'t like it, don\'t read it!\" Remember that people!
person firewall
schedule August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmmmm, getting a little flack I see. Because you are dealing with such a sensitive subject, you are bound to get divergent points of view. Again as you say it is a personal thing and if the reader finds it too difficult to deal with or too close to the subject being portrayed, then perhaps the fanfic is not the one to read. I think we all have subject matter we find difficult to deal with. I know myself, if the story I\'m reading begins going where I\'m not comfortable...I\'m gone.

That being said, I like how you are having Hermione act with Draco. She is NOT flling into his arms after the despicable thing he did. He deserves to suffer and he needs to stop pretending at being a big bad Death Eater. That is something he\'ll have to come to terms with before he becomes a father and is accepted by Hermione as such.

Okay, enough pontificating. I enjoyed your chapter. You dealt with the subject most sensitively.
person moi
schedule August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love the fic! hope you continue.

OMG whats finn\'s problem.

I would have deleted the flame too if it wasn\'t constructive!

Yikes someone has too much spare time!
person Pam
schedule August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like your fic, and hope you post again soon. Thanks.
person Angel
schedule August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love the story so far i hope that you get the next chapter up soon.
person ancientgirl
schedule August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I haven\'t reviewed until now, since I\'ve been with no power for a while. I love your story. And while rape is no laughing matter and nothing to be taken lightly, I\'m glad you didn\'t have Hermione just shut herself off or become some broken individual.

I\'m looking forward to seeing if Draco\'s feelings change and he begins to care for her. I\'m especially curious as to Lucius\' reaction. Wait I have to go back, Lucius is still around isn\'t he?
person Michelle
schedule August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ohhhhhhh. I also fogot to tell you (writer) thank you. you, update really soon. I love it. I hope hermione has twins. A girl and boy. can\'t wait for another exciting chapter.
person angel
schedule August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good ud really soon plz i love this story and can\'t get enough of it!!!!
person ~Sakurashope7~
schedule August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow cliff hanger....kind of haha well its still really good...twins!!! How exciting!! Update soon!!!!