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your story is brilliant i can\'t wait to find out what happens!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

that was great i wonder how snape was going to take to the new when he found out and man that is one way of finding out ~giggles~ well i just love the chapter and i still have high hopes for draco and i hope she get with him and i hope she get with him before the the twins are born i hope she get him feel the babies kick ... well please update soon and keep up the great work ...later for now

angel

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update soon puhlease!

Ok first, it isn\'t too late to get a Beta, but, they will want to look at the chapters already written and this can take a while as they also have their normal lives and other authors to Beta for. This has led to some authors choosing to update with unbeta-ed versions and then editing them later on, this way it keeps impatient readers at bay, whilst still ending up with near perfect chapters (Yes even the best of Beta\'s still makes a mistake) Really it is up to personal taste. I think your chapters are fine, but if it is really taking you longer to proof read then write a chapter maybe you should get one - although have you tried writing a paragraph or two, beta-ing, then writing then next paragraph and so on - I normally do this before sending my chapter to my Beta, as it is quicker and does mean my Beta has less work to do, and sends me my chapters back quickly.

You do also need to keep in mind, that a Beta could hold your story for over a week before being able to proof read it and send it back, which is why it took me a while and several stories before getting one. I only decided to get one, because it helped encourage me to proof read my own, and develop my own skills - for which I use to Beta for other people. (As well as the fact I am doing a Creative Writing Degree)

Secondly - your review, I thought this was a well written chapter that made me chuckle a bit with Draco\'s behaviour... hehehe... I like the twins names too... perfect!

I look forward to your next chapter, whether you decide to get them Beta-ed or not!

While I\'m disappointed we\'ve jumped in time, I still really like the story. When are her friends going to find out? Also, nice Snape...and Draco for confessing.

loved that they\'re developing feelings for each other...it the cutest thing that Snape helps her...

i do have one question though..y Tybalt? he\'s the central antagonist on the play and he\'s a jackass...so Hermione\'s going to name her kid after a jackass? okay...whatever...

Great story, update soon. I have to say I am happy that you are holding your ground about continuing the story, not just because I like it but because writing is a form of expressing yourself and nobody should ever try to repress that is another person. And again, great job.

what a coincidence! i\'ve also created chidren of draco and hermy myself! but because i dun write i rather prefer drawing them ;P and they\'re also twins XD girl an a boy ^^ but their names are different: nathan and genevieve. if you\'re curious how they look, go here:
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/21559564/ - parody about both of them
http://www.deviantart.com/view/10128002/ - both with full bio
http://www.deviantart.com/view/21514041/ - nathan
http://www.deviantart.com/view/11302684/ - old gen chibi portrait XD
http://www.deviantart.com/view/11421135/ - both once more :) as little children *giggle*

btw, very nice story, but i\'ve got a feeling that everything happens too fast...

Hey *frowns* I was attacked my family member. You shouldn\'t take your anger on, us, or the writer. I didn\'t broke down, I got stronger. it made me stronger. I was scared shirtless, but, it\'s destiny and there\'s nothing we can\'t do to stop it. It happen for reasons. Yes, i was terrified, too, but i didn\'t want to show i was weak, it took me time to recover and eventually i did, which i\'m proud. My cousin got raped and pregnant by my uncles brother. It\'s not the writers fault. And you should probably read the warning notes. *smiles sadly* just wanted to say that. your not by yourself, I had my familes support and always will, especially my mom\'s and sister. love your story (to writer).

i think that your story is brilliant and i really want to know what happens so please update soon!