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person Avanell
schedule September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, don\'t let him give in to her! HOpefully this is one where he really can\'t stand her personally? And that was such a good scene with the two parents-to-be. Loved it! Can\'t wait to hear - er, read - ron and harry\'s reaction.
person HiddenAllusion
schedule September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is brilliant! I\'m really enjoying this. I can\'t see Hermione giving her children the name of Malfoy, but I\'m looking forward to the reasoning behind it. And the romance, of course *grin.* Kaida, btw, it a beautiful name. And now I\'ll stop babbling and read more...
person lilycat
schedule September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Uh-oh- the inevitable moment of Pansiness has arrived. I love this chapter. I\'m glad that Draco is showing his regret- an important step for him to take. I hope that he punishes Pansy suitably for whatever she is planning!
person HiddenAllusion
schedule September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I finished it! Have I mentioned that I think it\'s excellent. I like the storyline, I like where you\'re taking it, and I can\'t wait to see what happens next. Thanks for the story so far!
person Sommer
schedule September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Pansy, well thats trouble waiting to happen
Great Parts
person JTBJAB
schedule September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Uh oh! There\'s gonna be trouble! Oooh can\'t wait to find out what\'s gonna happen!
person ?
schedule September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i liked it
person firewall
schedule September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nicely done! Extra reading for me! It was great that they were able to enjoy the potions class. And goodness knwos Draco needed to take care of Hermione...it\'s not good enough that he is sorry, now he has to step up and be supportive. Grrrr, that Pansy.
person Koppe
schedule September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I very much like this story (although I though it skipped a bit too fast forward to the end of the pregnancy).
I hope there will be some interaction (or *reaction* ;-) with both Hermione\'s and Draco\'s family -- as
well as from their friends. I also hope the story will follow the children for a while, perhaps even as they
start and goes to Hogwarts (maybe an epilouge).

Keep up the good work -- and please update soon.
-Koppe
person angel
schedule September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
man that was great i hope draco lose the hole showing her happness is a a weeknese bs and i wound what els or who els is going to help them along ... well in till next time keep up the great work and later

angel

ps sorry i have really bad spelling