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August 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ooof... boy that was... good, hehe, it reminds me of an anime um... papa to kiss in the dark, Im not saying your story isnt original, its, just dunno, the relationship between the two main characters is very similar, well, I think you
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August 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You know what? I liked it. This is the first James/Harry fic I've read that was Shouta but I did like it...and like the person above me said, in an odd way, it was sweet! ^^ Kudos!
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February 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
If yu don't mind me saying and this will sound weird but that was a sweet story, I liked it alot, good job, Rose
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February 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed your story, and i'm sorry everyone else is giving you such a hard time about it.
This is, after all, ADULT fanfiction, a place where we can fulfill our fantasies or just write and interesting plot, like a behind-the-scenes-story of what's really happening.
It's very believable, how you've made Harry reluctant at first, but willing. This story is incredibly better than many stories on aff, especially in the harry potter section, so the flamers really should, if they must flame, go to them.
4.5 Stars.
This is, after all, ADULT fanfiction, a place where we can fulfill our fantasies or just write and interesting plot, like a behind-the-scenes-story of what's really happening.
It's very believable, how you've made Harry reluctant at first, but willing. This story is incredibly better than many stories on aff, especially in the harry potter section, so the flamers really should, if they must flame, go to them.
4.5 Stars.
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February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
well i like this story and i know how you feel. people really need to learn to read right.
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January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Don't worry about flamers, if they weren't interested, they wouldn't be here reading.
Only small-minded people, who apparently aren't writers themselves, would have the audacity to slam someone else's creation.
Only small-minded people, who apparently aren't writers themselves, would have the audacity to slam someone else's creation.
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January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have to agree with you if you dont want to read the story then dont. Just because you write it doesnt mean that you do it. Good job standing up for all writers.
I do like this story though. It isnt as twisted as some of them out there
I do like this story though. It isnt as twisted as some of them out there
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January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this si fucked up. wats wrong with u people?????????????
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November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This one-shot is well written but..........no offence but the kid is eleven years old.
I know that at that age i was already experiencing small things, but with kids of my age.....to me this story sounds a littler weird, if harry was older than i would like it more.
But besides the age, this small story is very cute. Keep up -_-
I know that at that age i was already experiencing small things, but with kids of my age.....to me this story sounds a littler weird, if harry was older than i would like it more.
But besides the age, this small story is very cute. Keep up -_-
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November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very good