AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for The Price of Knowledge

by HappilyJaded

person cruttan
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG do you write hot scenes. I'm alternating between hot flashes and shivers.

Ron can be quite an ass, eh? I read another fic where Hermione overheard Ron and Harry discussing her in such a manner, and it's always been one of my favorites. I like it because I find that plot device to be infinitely more reasonable than the OMG RON IS EVIL fics that push her into Draco's arms. I can SEE him saying things like that, just out of being oblivious and, well, Ron. Lovable, but more than a bit slow on the emotional front. So I really liked the way you wrote that scene.

I hope they're forced to eat their words! The big jerks! At least Hermione got some afterwards. Sort of. I'm sure more fulfillment is one the way. Right? :D
person Dreamweaver
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful chapter once again. Was so not expecting Paravti to make a move. Will be interesting to see where you take this (I think you should explore both options). LOL
person cruttan
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Just checking in- chapter eleven- WOOT!

Waking up to Draco on top of you. *licks lips* Yes please!

Well, at least Harry *almost* apologized. Naughty boys. I'm quite anxious to hear what happens when Hermione and Draco resume their activities, so off to the latest update! Yay!
person cruttan
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm.... I have no input as to the question. Too much faith in your innate ability to create hotness, and I can see either one being fitting, depending on where you're planning on going with the story.

I giggled when Lavendar was clueless. I actually thought that Parvati had cottoned on (which she did in a way I suppose).

What else can I say? Hot as always. I'm glad that I'm caught up now. *grin* Do you have a livejournal?
person Phobe
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great update! =) Hmm, I think Hermione should
just stick with Draco. ;D
person Melf
schedule January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, great story! You can't possibly leave it like
that! Can't wait till the next update! =)
person Jo
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
fine piece of work. had a nice time reading it.
person Kiara
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story is absolutely BRILLIANT! I need a new chapter soon. That cliffy on the last one.....not cool. Not cool at all. Though it did make me laugh that he was so horny that he couldn't wait for her to wake up. lol
person ashley
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is a great story please update soon.
person Rin-chan
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Gods....you 're evil!!!!! I can"t wait what'll happen next!!!!
Please update soooooooooon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ja ne