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by HappilyJaded

person mAlFoY_rUlEz
schedule September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Mmm, lookin forward to hermione seducing Draco M!
person Chris
schedule September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great writin but we need some dual action soon babe! oh and want malfoy Bad. Whateva you do, please please please don\'t make this fic fluffy and soppy an romantic and therefore soo typical...
person morwen re
schedule September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good job! i like it, so update again soon, please!
person josh
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this fic is starting to get really interesting. is draco gunna give the real thing to her? i hope he will, as that would b her ultimate sex ed
josh xxx
person Sara
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
thanx so much for the fab update! wonder what u got in store 4 us next up! i hope she goes for draco - luv a bad boy:D!!
person jess
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awesome! cannot w8 to see what happens...hope draco will fully \'notice\' her soon & teach her a thing or 2 more about sex ;o
person Sommer
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ron and Harry notice the way she walkes. Hmmmm?
Great Part
person sara
schedule September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is the best Please please update soon Can\'t wait to find out what happens between her and Draco malfoy. would he blackmail her into having sex with him if he caught her in the act?
person Saget, Bob Saget
schedule September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow, that is amazing....
person Kat
schedule September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your writing and everything is great. The only thing that may need improvement is the pacing of everything. I know its only 3 chapters in but it seems like its taken forever to get there. This doesn\'t necessarily mean longer chapters, maybe more progression through out the chapter. It seems like only 1 thing is happening each chapter and thats it.