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OMG THAT WAS THE WORST CLIFFHANGER IN HISTORY! I HATE YOU! lol j/k, actually i love you, this story is great! please please please update soon!

HURRY! update please!

BRAVO! I am loving this! Keep it up!

Sex! LoVe iT! This story makes people horny! Update!

hey, what if hermione gets exposed or caught for a change?? malfoy could blackmail or take advantage...? that would b awesum and canon of him.

Great! Story! dont worry i think you know what your doing, please update soon, i cant wait to see what happens1

omg...that was great update soon PLEASE!!!
I know my reviews suck... but really u write pretty good girl

very promising indeed! hope she gets to participate this time! that would be a pleasant surprise!

participate with DRACO himself ofcourse!

Hmm thats funny I don\'t remember saying you didn\'t know what you were doing. I also don\'t remember telling you how to write your story. I gave some suggestions on things to think about to improve the story telling aspect of your writing. Your grammer has been ok, and the plot is excellent. Lets face it some of the way the scenes are unfolding, well its slower than Rashomon.

If you can\'t take the contructive criticism along with the praise then I guess I\'ll just stop reviewing. I never have any intention of flameing anyone, why would I? It will just discourage writers from making more D/Hr fics which is the opposite of what I want.