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for Secret Encounters: The Punishment

by MoChroi

schedule September 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I hope that you continue this... I love the D/s idea with Sev and Harry. Brilliant!
schedule July 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you're going to write another right? pretty please theses two fics were awesome!
person nari-chan
schedule September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hi i just love this story is perfect suspeneful loving caring i just love well keep up the good work ok
person antipyro
schedule September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I\'m gonna have to look all these in the series - HOT or WHAT????

Just keep \'em coming, baby.

Love it.


Thank you.
person K-san\'s adopted daughter
schedule August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY SMUT!!!! I lOVE IT TO DEATH! Can not wait for the third one*drools*GAWD Harry and Sev are so hot together and your one shots make it even BETTER!! AHH!!! I\'m gonna die waiting for the update. Hurry, please?^_^thanx!!
person Katie K
schedule August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooh that was fantastic!
person Acid Quill
schedule August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Better. The pacing flows and your phrasing is quite nice. Is this truly a D/s relationship, or are they just playing games? Because Harry takes a lot of liberty for being in that kind of relationship. Also, Master should be capitalized, whether Harry\'s saying it or thinking it. It\'s an appelation in this case, and no true sub thinks of their Master or Mistress any other way.
person Angie/les`
schedule August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmmmm how interesting.... It would be cool if you could continue this.
person ajax
schedule August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YES! please continue! Give me, (and Harry) more!
person Hazel
schedule August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ewww! Sub!Harry!