rate_review Reviews

I\'m wildly addicted to the post HBP fics, specially ones that pick out the parts that suggest that Snape isn\'t totally on the dark side :).

the story is well written so far and does a good job of setting the tone for the troubling times that are ahead for Harry and his friends. i only have one minor criticism. in the first chapter you said something was going to effect the five teens. it should have been Affect the teens, not Effect. but other than that minor mistake, you have done a good job so far.

In my last post, i mentioned your using the word effect in place of affect. i wanted to offer a piece of advice to you, and to any other story writer on this very common mistake. the easiest way to remember which version of the word is correct is that Effect is a noun, an example being...\"the effect of his actions were immediate\".....and Affect is a verb, an example being....\"all of the people were affected\"...again, i dont want this to sound like i\'m trying to flame or anything. you really are doing a wonderful job on your story.

Ooh I like this so far. Update soon please!

A very impressive opening chapter and I can\'t wait to read the next! Your writing style flows well and is easy to understand and you\'ve written the characters thoughts brilliantly. I really love this and I can\'t wait to you update. Keep up the fantastic work!