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January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i like the diary format, but buying the dormitory open isnt as good as sneaking in and putting up a silencing charm because then every boday knows about them, and its funner when its dangerous right??
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January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i think you've really captured how a teenage dude would feel when doing for the first time. Its honest, its hot ands its uhhm cute!
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November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it was gud! but would b better if you mad it longer & AROUSING,,,,,,,,,,,,,!plzzzzzz add chapt 2!=)=>
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November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
right more or let me
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November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
If this was your first fic, then well done!
I don\'t like writing in the diary style, personally, as I think it\'s a lot harder than writing in third person, with the thoughts and stuff, but you did a good job of it.
I don\'t like writing in the diary style, personally, as I think it\'s a lot harder than writing in third person, with the thoughts and stuff, but you did a good job of it.
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November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOVE IT THE BEST FIC I EVER READ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It was good! I liked it a lot.
Great job!
Great job!
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August 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this story is really really good. lots of detail =) please dont leave it as a one-fic! update!
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August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was one of the best storys I have read. Please add on soon!!!
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August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i enjoyed that! plz write more