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for Care To Explain?

by Closet

person kitti
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
u need to create a seqel. one with the 'veela rituals or childbirth' in it.
i loved this! it was highly adorable. even if it had next-to-none in the smut catagory, it was still surprisingly good.
tankee!!
person lita
schedule January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved it!! I would love to see the veela rituals also!!
person FabledFaeri
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I want to see the Veela rituals for childbirth! Bloody good story! It just screams sequel you know?
person lisa
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story and made me laugh and smile at the end. You are a great writer and I hope to read more from you
person spacemonkey
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story. Love Draco.

person Venus
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!! THAT WAS AN AWESOME STORY!! YOU SHOULD MAKE A SEQUAL!!! I LUVED IT!!!
person Toni
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ok. Now you've got me curious about the Veela rituals for childbirth. Any chance of a sequel?

And just because: I loved it. The clothes disappearing in the Great Hall part especially. THAT was funny. Keep up the great writing!
person JJ
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hee hee hee. I loved this... so will we see the ritals for veela childbirth?
person solana
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is good I think you should write a sequal telling about said rituals for childbirth
person circeniko
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Creative use of the veela idea. I wasn't sure that Draco was in character until the end, but he appears to be his smirking self :)