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December 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is some story.
As you put it in nice short chapters, it is easy to read and follow.
It took me only a few hours to read al the chapters.
Nice twists, certainly a great many surprises, some very interesting characters and oh bullocks...it is just the greatest story ever! So there!
As you put it in nice short chapters, it is easy to read and follow.
It took me only a few hours to read al the chapters.
Nice twists, certainly a great many surprises, some very interesting characters and oh bullocks...it is just the greatest story ever! So there!
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December 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
whew, this was long. took me 3 days to make it through what you have written, naturally during time when i should have been doing other stuff. oh well, twas worth it and i look forward to reading more soon. hermione's powers are amazing, if i do say so myself. alright, you better update quickly!(lets not make the new reader unhappy =P )
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December 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow that was great .. im glad he get her to let go .. please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now
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December 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was so good, please hurry up and finish the story!!!
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December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I found a flaw in your story. Avery is a Deatheater, but his first name is never mentioned in the Lexicon. Robastan La Strange is the husband of Bellatrix Black La Strange. This can be confusing I know but even in an AU you have to keep the canon characters strait.
Good story by-the-by. If you would clean up the minor errors it could be great.
Good story by-the-by. If you would clean up the minor errors it could be great.
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November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW! That was brilliant. My apologies for not reviewing recently but I couldn't not today. Absolutely amazing.
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November 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow .. that was great .. im glad he is gone now .. now every one he has killed can rest in peace ... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now
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November 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Update, goddamit!!! Now, please, this is so GOOD!!!
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October 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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September 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This really is my favorite fic going right now. Love the depth you are putting into it. Keep it up!