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OOoooohhhhh top twist there with fudge!! :)

blast Fudge i hope snape finds her soon ...man and i hope Dumbledore find out about him soon and what she has dont ... i cant what in till next chapter soooo in till then later ...and keep up the great work

angel

p.s. in glad you post here to thank you for a grat story later

I\'m reading it, and it is pretty good so far. I can really feel hermione\'s frustration when the accio and alohamora didnt work.

Hermione lost her magic? I guess that happened when she was giving it to Harry.... hmm.... and why the Ministry didn\'t detect her talking about magic, and why nobody can track her....interesting!

Surely her elemental magic would still work, like when she is afraid for her life!?!?!?

Anyway, update soon *grin* sorry I had to say that!

Please keep writing! You are a very talented writer, and I can\'t wait to read more.

Thanks very much for emailing me. I love this story so far and real glad that your going to stretch it outhe storyline since i love long stories. It sucks though that Hermione cant do any magic, now she will think that she is crazy. Cant wait till Severus comes into the picture. Well update when you can and let me know please. ^-^

I am enjoying this story but I wish you would move it on a bit. I do not intend to be critical but sometimes stories move too fast and I would like them slowed down but with this one I would like it to go bit faster. Either get her out of the loony bin or get some magical interaction with her in the loony bin.

Of course this is your story and I will follow it anyway no matter how you proceed. This is just my suggestion. Please continue as you see fit.

this is great so far. I hope you continue to write this story. why is her magic not working? is it because of the meds, or because her wand is broke? why does she have a scar like harrys??? snape needs to find her fast...need some major romance.

It bugs me too when all people say is \'update soon\' but sometimes people don\'t know what to say, or only that they liked the chapter and that they want more soon. You should accept also that although someone might have time to read your story or a new chapter, that they might not have time to write out a thoughtful review!

So take it as a compliment that somebody wants you to update, that they want MORE of YOUR story!

I try and write longish reviews, but sometimes nothing comes to mind, except the desire for more!

Saying that you don\'t want someone to write \'update soon\' could meant that more people won\'t bother to write a review at all.

I\'ve seen that happen before, a friends story had over twenty reviews for each chapter, and after she wrote \"please don\'t just write \'update soon\'\" she had less than ten, sometimes only one or two!

Also, you should write for yourself anyway, don\'t write for other people, and don\'t feel pressured to write a chapter just because your readers and fans ask you too (you have no idea how hard that was to write seen as I love your story) So let people write what they want in a review, because it is the little bit of contribution that your readers can make, and you should read between the lines...... \'update soon\' doesn\'t just say they want you to write more, but that they love your story, and they enjoy it so much that they want more, and soon!!!!

I hope you took the time to read to the end of this review, and this is in no way a flame, as technically it has nothing to do with your story.

I love your story, and I love the way you have a strong grip on each of the characters.

I also love how you are making me empathise with Hermione, and making me worry and concerned that the Ministry haven\'t been able to detect her speaking of magic. All of this could have been said with a simple \'update soon\'.

Please read between the lines in reviews.... when a reader takes the time to write one, don\'t throw it back in their face!

I really enjoy this story and am glad that I happened apon it. I expecially liked that you wern\'t afraid to kill Harry, not because I don\'t like him but because most of the stories are just tweaking Rowlings version to what everybody wants to happen in the books. This means a lot of them are the same but yours is unique. Keep up the great work and I can\'t wait for you to update.
~Joanna~