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for Everything I Do, I Do It For You

by sbrande

person Joani
schedule November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story so far, can\'t wait to read your next update! ~Joani
person tor
schedule November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey,

Love the fic... can\'t wait for the next chapter to come up! Keep up the amazing work and make sure you beta your fics... it makes all the much easier to read!!!!

Tor
schedule November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey i love this story great work but what happens to ginny now that percy is taking care of her i know its not really part of the story but you left us hanging in percys office o update soon
person angel
schedule November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow ... nice place snape .. but how are you going to find mione ... and doc what are you going to do to mione ... what kind of shock therapy are you going to give her ... please update soon and keep up the awesome work and i cant wait in till next time ..later for now

angel

person JTBJAB
schedule November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
He\'s gonna show Hermione the picture of her parents... isn\'t he!?!

I really can\'t wait till Severus finds her!
person angel eyes
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
im really liking the complexity of this story. i wish it would move a bit faster but i understand why you are writing it as you are. even moving ahead a week or a few days at a time would help the flow of this story. good job so far, i eagerly await updates.
person Cherie
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like it! *gives two thumbs up* keeps me guessing. My only critique would to say putting the thoughts of the characters in Italics...it just makes for easier reading between thoughts and actual statements. Double checking to see if it was \' or \" makes me lose focus of the story. Other than that, I think it\'s pretty good...Your take on the characters and the situations is really nice! Keep up the saweet work!
person Anon
schedule October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
its been 16 chapters and no interaction between hermione and snape
person Jonathan
schedule October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Congratulations on a very fine piece of writing. I do hope that you will be in a position to update soon - and that Fudge will get what he deserves!
person fraser
schedule September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is great, i can\'t wait for the next chappie, you are a really good writer