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November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! Well done! I can\'t wait till the next one! Grr I feel so sorry for Hermione right now!
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November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
~lol~ man peter you are in so much trouble now ... i cant wait in till next time .. i how mione will be ok in till snape can save her ... the finn is going to get her killed or something .... please severus hurry .. keep up the awesome work and later for now
angel
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November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m really enjoying this story. Please update soon.
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November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey sorry I haven\'t reviewed in a while I have ben away from my comp for a whole month (WAAAAHHH!!!). Thankfully I am back and my withdrawal can end now. Anyhow I lobed that last two chapters though I am truely hating \"Tha sadistic basterd\" now (I am sure that is that point) . Also I am confused as to why she passed out but I am sure you will explain next chapter. Great work.
~Joanna~
~Joanna~
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November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think this is a really interesting idea for a story, and I\'ve been waiting on tenterhooks to see the confrontation between Snape and Hermione when that finally happens. It\'s destined to be interesting!
At the same time I have to say that I\'ve found suspension of disbelief really hard. Luckily I have never had personal experience in a psych ward, but both my parents used to be psychiatric nurses (and my dad has gone back to the career again quite recently). What I read in this story in regards to restraints and doctor/patient interviews I don\'t find particularly compelling. I recommend doing some research into rules and regulations of psychiatrists and nurses and patients in these kinds of institutions because it would help add a lot of background colour to what you\'re writing, and can only improve your story.
At the same time I have to say that I\'ve found suspension of disbelief really hard. Luckily I have never had personal experience in a psych ward, but both my parents used to be psychiatric nurses (and my dad has gone back to the career again quite recently). What I read in this story in regards to restraints and doctor/patient interviews I don\'t find particularly compelling. I recommend doing some research into rules and regulations of psychiatrists and nurses and patients in these kinds of institutions because it would help add a lot of background colour to what you\'re writing, and can only improve your story.
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November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great update! I hope she won\'t be completely lost of hope when Snape finds her! please update soon....I can\'t wait. ~Joani
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November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have emailed you... and yay, so cool!
Great chapter too... I\'m glad you gave Hermione closure for her parents death - at least something good has come from her being there!
Evil cliffie though, and I hope you can update soon!
Great chapter too... I\'m glad you gave Hermione closure for her parents death - at least something good has come from her being there!
Evil cliffie though, and I hope you can update soon!
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November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow poor mione ... please snape you have to find her soon ..i think the finn is going to do some thing really really bad .... keep up the awesome work and later for now
angel
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November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
18 chapters and no interaction between snape and hermione
i am loosing patience
i am loosing patience
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November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great job keep it up