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December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well I am enjoying all these updates. I am so glad that you arn't one of those authors that updats MAYBE once a month with short chapters. Loving the story so far but I always feel so bad for Hermione. Great work either way.
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December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dude! I hate that guy - poor Hermione... I think a camera should be set up or something in her rooms... that only the Dr knows about! But then that might spoil your plans... bugger! Lol! Great chapter and I can't wait till your next chapter!
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December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor Hermione; I had been wondering how they were going to make it so that she doesn't think that the Wizarding World is real (from the challenge guidelines anyway). Of the couple of responses to the challenge that I have read, I think this one is the best. You have set up the main plot of the story well and reveal bits and pieces of information with each chapter. I like that the Squib is Tolmie Crobobin (whose name is a mouthful), it was a good twist, and although I was suspicious of him I didn't that he was the man in question.
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December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
poor mione .. but the good news is albus know about fudge now .. please please more more i love it ..keep up the awesome work ..later for now
angel
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December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is becoming one of my favorite stories. Looking forward to more updates. Thanks for the frequent updates.
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December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! What has Severus gotten himself into! I can't wait to read more! Update again and soon!
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December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice. i like it. update soon
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December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ok love the story but why dosent hermione tell doc lopes about finn he seems to care for her and there has to be some kind of bond if he saw her dying in that vision if she told him he could be removed not fired but removed from being incare of hermione hes seen with his own eyes that finn is always using "excessive force" great story hope finn gets something happining to him keep up the fast updates
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December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I started to read your story because I thought it had been completed and I was wrong! IT is really good! I don't know what I'm going to do now with the rest of my night going crazy cause I cannot read the end! AHHH!!!! Please write and post! Write and Post! I love your story! Best I have read in ages!!!! Thank YOU!
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December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great storyline! I love HG/SS ships but this is quite superior. Good plot with great research! email me when the next chapter is up I can't wait!! LOL ;o)X