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for Itoshii Sune-ku

by Messa

person saskes iris
schedule December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I didn't think they were odd i especially liked the interaction with the weasly family the twins are some of my fav characters so i loved they got some attention. Noted you didn't make ron his friend really, is there a reason for the lack of ron cuz i am all for it he is afterall a bit annoying.
person JJ
schedule December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Don't be down!!! That wasn't bad. I wonder why Harry had to meet the Weasley's so soon, but it's done and now they are on to Japan. Are they really going to get there?
person Night Shade
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
more...need more! please update again soon ^.^
person JJ
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I wonder why Harry dreams of Sirius?
That's an interesting plot device, by the way. It's also a good way to keep Sirius sane. I wonder if the new family is going to break him out so they can have a certified (or is that certifiable), grown-up with them?
Nicely written.
person Saske's Iris
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeah I am glad you decided not to do anything to his dna. I think he is already special enough without the added creature. Course it's your fic and i am sure i will like whatever you decide:) Cool that the seer regonized the dreamer, neat ability. Anyway, I am really enjoying your story, i love japanese too so the title caught me and now the story has me too! looking forward to more!
person The Dark Child[am a girl
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOve it keep it up and UPDATE A S P

THANKS!!!!!
person Aku-densetsu
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is the funniest story...i hope the rest of it turns out as beautifully as these chapters did. the dialogue and interaction between the children is wonderful, and Harry's reactions to everything happening around him is just too cute. i hope you'll update soon. I must know what happens! Ja ne!
person JJ
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Are they really going to make Harry like them?
He's weird enough as it is.
When and how are they going to Japan?
Is Snape going to let them go, or go after them?
This is a very interesting story and I hope you go further with it.
person AlizasSin
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You Japanese titles seem a bit garbled.
person Black_Cat
schedule November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter... hope you will update soon^^