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January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sorry about the computer. Just update when you can. You can still write the story with a pencil and paper, then put it on the net when you get the chance. Sounds like your characters are still putting things together. A little action or some more info would be nice.
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December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's been a long time between updates so let me get some things straight. A house elf from Japan is taking them in??? And the newbies are animal crosses with Voldy? And they escaped and took Harry with them? I kinda thought the dark man was Snape. I really want to know what cross the boy is. I guessed he was a vamp cross, but not any longer. You still have my interest and I look forward to more. Hopefully they will be in a safe place soon so they can grow up. It will be interesting to see what they turn into. I wonder if Dumbledore knows that Harry is missing yet? After all, if they do get to Japan, how is Harry going to meet up with Sirius? Thanks for continuing your story.
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December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
he maybe you should have an incident when Harry's eyes flash red b/c he's pissed adn they find out that he has a connection with Voldy moldy but. ?hmmmmmmmmmmm
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December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
How old are you? Because you've got the ramblings of a little person's mind down pretty well. How is a train trip going to get them to Japan? Maybe, for the sake of space, you might want to magic them to Japan so you can get to the plot again. Sorry he's scared of his new brother. How is he going to accept Snape if he doesn't like dark eyes??? I thought the man on the train would turn out to be Snape instead of a dirty old man. So Harry will learn to fight to protect his sisters? I thought they were quite older than he was? Anyway, have a safe trip and a great visit with your family. Happy Holidays!!!
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December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
After writing my review, I like to read others to see what they think. In rereading an old one I wrote you I wondered why they had to meet the Weasleys. Did you do that so Harry can tell us about his family and Japan through his letters to Ginny? If so, that was great planning! Are they really going to Japan? Why Japan?
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December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hmmm...a good prank... one on the twins would be to make them look different from one another, or a spell that flashes neon lights over their head warning other people "they're trying to prank you"
Sorry...the week is ended and my brain has finally gone into sleep mode. i liked these past chapters, by the way. ^.~
Sorry...the week is ended and my brain has finally gone into sleep mode. i liked these past chapters, by the way. ^.~
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December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Update quickly please I can't wait to see where this is going.
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December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love!Please update soon!
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December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it! Its so cute, please update soon. Thanks.
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December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT keep it up and please update A S P
THANKS!!!!!!!
THANKS!!!!!!!