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for Of Snakes and Men

by bookwyrm378

person Anon
schedule September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
jhhfj
person chi no hana
schedule August 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awww... how cute! is this, like, gonna be ooc for some charas?
person Tiamat
schedule August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww thats so sweet! Half the time I keep waiting for Harry to call her Mom :P I\'m looking foreward to your next chapter!
person nutmeg
schedule August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is really unique...write some more! ^_^

Rock on!
person Ryuze
schedule August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have read similar fanfics, but yours is still different and doesn\'t seem as a repeat. I like how you have basilks as peacekeepers, not just killers. also, you are taking your time with harry when he is still young, not rushing to the time he is old enough to finish the story. I like that, because some just skip so much time and events that could happen. I like how you have more background.
person Slayerq
schedule August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story. I am interested to see where you take it from here. Thanks!
person ShatteredxDream
schedule August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it!!! I can\'t wait until Harry and Voldie meet. Update soon please!
schedule August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like it, it\'s very different. Those do seem like the thoughts of an ancient Basilisk. The basilisk herself seems like a favorite grandmother/aunt figure. I assume that will change as she will be taking care of Harry. Harry acts like a proper four year old, which is good because people usually make children too smart or too stupid, but you\'ve seemed to capture the perfect age mentallity. The Dursleys act just as I would expect them too, the scene of foring Harry to cook almst seems like it could come out of the real book. So bravo and I can\'t wait for more.

BSG
person Crystel
schedule August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It\'s has a very good start but you should start writing longer chapters
person tidus2529
schedule August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
not bad , u just need longer chappies , or more chappies at the same time. ^-^ update soon