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for To The Dungeons We Must Go

by cameowitch

schedule September 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
DAMN i like this story, however i was hoping Sevie would be preggers too ^^
i think that would have given poor lucius a heart attack

much love
Lyra
schedule March 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodness! That was hilarious at the end! Good job!
schedule October 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMFG THAT WAS FANTASMIGORIC!!!!!!
person greenwizard
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
If you weren't intending to continue I strongly think you should. It's just too delicious to stop there!
person I love Luci M.
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hilarious. I love it and for a moment I thought Sev was pregnant, too.
But you gave us an unexpected End. Great, really.
person moreta
schedule January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was good...fooled me..i thought severus was pregnant too...good job : )
person Daisy Mae
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am sure J.K. Rowling must howl with laughter when she reads attempts like this. This is so bad that you don't even need the usual disclaimer. Of course you aren't making money off it.

Now, where's that gong?
person momoko
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good chapter
person Alaina
schedule November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh that was good. I\'m laughing so hard right now. I thought Luci was going to be pregnant. Little bit of a shock. Anyway well done on a brilliant story
love lots
Alaina
person tessa3
schedule September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*guffaws* DAMN!!! you had me going!!!! until i get to the very friggin end.. i was like... What DAD??? NOPE.. Ministry of Magic.. i started choking and laughing and thinking.. DAMN they got me... LMAO!!!! good one shot.. very good