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umm...dont you think that sev and luc and the aurors should send harry to the hospital first?
after they know that he\'s safe with the mediwizards they can then talk to shacklebolt about what happened...
for all we know, he could be dying while they talk!

It was a great chapter and I was all for Narcissa going along and creating a \'bloody\' (literally and figuratively) mess to the little farts. The only thing I had a problem with was how long they took to do everything although knowing that time was of the essence to save Harry\'s life. I also kinda looked down upon Sev and the twins when Sev said that all the potions and spells would kill Harry and then the twins laughed at Severus, causing Severus to laugh as well. In my head I was going, \'wait, if I found out someone I thought of as a friend, brother, what not was being tortured and would die if not reached in time, I would damn well not find anything funny nor would I waste time in getting him out, I would have gone as quickly as I was able to, definitely not wait until morning, at the latest maybe late in the night. But it was great except for that. I was just wondering if all that was pertinent to the story or if there was another reason it went like that. I left my email in case you felt it was worth it to explain why it seemed so unreal in that respect. (I know its fanfiction, it\'s not supposed to be real, but I just thought that in a general situation like that, it would be more realistic) But good job and I can\'t wait to read more. Good luck on your writing.

Very good chapter twelve! The characterizations were nicely fleshed out. Oh, you need to change from \"Shacklebot\" to \"Shacklebolt\"...I somehow don\'t picture Kingsley as a robotic kind of guy...

o that is evil!
i like it
lets kill the beaver and weasel and weaslet

This story is amazing. I beg you to post Chapter twelve soon! ;)

Great chapter, I can\'t wait to see how Harry fares after this, Ihope \'Sev the Magnificent, Omniscient Master of all things Liquidy and Foul-tasting\' will be able to save Harry and bring him back. And I can\'t wait to see how they make all 4 of those idiots pay.

*eye twitch* can you please, please, please have those three killed off sometime for what they\'re doing to harry?! PLEASE! they need to DIE!!! I can\'t wait until friday now... *chews finger nails*

OMG I love you and your fic and your car insurance! This chapter was amazing, I so want that fucking Granger bitch to be in a world of pain!! *cough* Don\'t know where that came from but let\'s just put it back, shall we? *scrambles to hide insane twin out of sight* Ahem, anyway, I don\'t mind it being late, and take whatever time you need for the remaining chapters-it\'s still an amazing fic!

All that Hermione and company have done to Harry, he\'s NOT going to be the same as before...

i hate griffendors!
dumbledor in perticular