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muhaha...when Hermione started going on about \"the little children\" I was SO reminded of Micheal Jackson. * in simpering voice*we must heal the world for the little children...*slightly mad giggle*

I\'m such a bad reviewer, but I just wanted to tell you how much I have been enjoying the story. You have all my favorites together. Lucius, Severus, Blaise, Draco and Harry...sigh. You think there\'s a bed in Malfoy Manor big enough for the 5 of them? I bet there is.

I adore it... I totally and completely can\'t wait until you write more and update! yes... updates are good... weeeeee... looking forward to friday... ^_^

Great job on your story!

much love and llama\'s

rose

I hope those three die in hell.... ^^ loved the chapter

SQUEE!! YOU UPDATED!! *happy dance* And now my dogs are scared. Anyway, this chapter was amazing, this fic is amazing, and...um...Movies!! Yep, movies are amazing. Now that that bit of insanity is over (no idea where it comes from) I\'m so happy they got Harry! I hope he\'s basically alright! Stupid Weasel bitch. Anyway, I\'m so glad Arthur wasn\'t involved! and the twins! *gives the three men puppies* Well, there\'s that insanity again. Take your time writing the rest because as much as I want updates, every chapter you post means it\'s one chapter closer to being finished. And that will be sad. Thanks for writing this amazing fic! Luv\'nstuff!

Okay, so I\'m confused: Why - if they expected Harry\'s condition to be so bad that they\'d need to administer medical aid in a matter of minuted when they went to save him, and they would have to be oh so fast - they didn\'t go right away but decided to have a long conference, some hurt/comfort, and then go to SLEEP?! How tired did they have to be - comatose? And if they were (which, from their ability to talk, they probably weren\'t), are there no energy potions in the wizarding world?

And even before that - with the twins - didn\'t see much hurry in their actions, even though they had witnessed Harry screaming, and it seems that they knew what was happening exactly (Snape did ask if they knew that what was being done to Harry would kill him, and they agreed that they knew that).

Also on an earlier point - the letter from the kidnappers had enought references pointing to A-Harry\'s schoolmates, and B-Griffindors, that anyone would have bothered to inspect that angle in an investigation righ away, and adding the fact that the letter was infused with strong emotions which would generaly only come from a close person - most likely candidates being Harry\'s well known friends, it is very unbelievable that no one put 2 plus 2 together right away - there were adult, smart, industrious, ex-spies, Death Eaters reading it, after all.

I hope you don\'t take this too hard, I didn\'t write this to cause you grief (though, admttedly I\'m a bit heated right now), I did try to ignore all these things for a couple of last chapters, closing my eyes to anything plot-related that didn\'t really work, but it just got to be too much for me - I ended up having to skip portions of this last chapter just to keep reading (so I\'m sorry if my first critisism is unfounded and there was a valid reason stated somwere in the middle of all the leisurely chatter for why they couldn\'t go righ away). The earlier chapters with the romance you did very well, they were a pleasure to read and beautifully done, it\'s just your mystery writing skills that need more fine-tuning.

its ok
but I was sick of the amount of gabbering these people did!
Instead of talking through ur ass, DO SOMETHING!!!
they talked too much and there was too much amusement!
HARRY\'S MISSING AND DYING!!!! THEY SHOULDNT BE LAUGHING!!!!!
FUCK!!!
I felt like shaking the screen when Lucius pouted and everyone chuckled! WTF!
I HATED TAHT PART!!
THEY TOOOK TOOOOO FUKING LONG TO GET INTO ACTION!!
BASTARDS...
AND R, H AND G ARE FUCKERS AS WELL
AND SO R U FOR WRITING THIS SHIT!!!

update soon great chapter.

ooohh kaay..
i like it
but I had a few complaints:
1) why did you make the slytherins soo dumb?! Anyone can put 2&2 together and figure out \"Oh it must be the Gryffindors...after all, it says so IN THE F*****G LETTER and they were the ones who abandoned them!\" Sev Luc and Draco are smart enuff to deduce that!
2) there was a lot of unnecessary clutter in the chapters...like would sev and blaise really kiss when harry\'s in danger? why make sev scared of cissa? thats idiotic! There was too much fun going on for my liking...
Harry\'s kidnapped! Dont just stand there! DO SOMTHING!
*shakes head*
3) Luc was too effeminate in his worries...it was very OOC of him
4) the characters spent WAY too much time talking about planning than actually going over and getting him;
its disappointing bc thats not their personality
*rolls eyes*
all in all, it was a so-so chapter
pluses for effort

let the general public give the malfoys the right to choose the bloody i don\'t know what\'s punishment! (please)
i like the twins and aurther how will bill and charly react? (percy i don\'t care about)