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for Unexpected Love

by DeirdraDomain

person Missi
schedule August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well THAT\'S gonna make it more difficult for Harry to get Lucius, innit? Love this update, can\'t wait for the next one! (cause I wanna see what Blaise\'s up to......)
person Alexa
schedule August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You tease... such a great chapter but with such a teasing end... which is great too, actually...
I\'ll be eagerly waiting for the next one!
person myniephoenix
schedule August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh my... i\'m gunna have to say poor harry on this one eh?? i mean... luc is gunna get the wrong idea now huh... *sigh* nothing is ever easy..
person LOOK AT MY DING-A-LING-LING
schedule August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! good stuff! I cant believe lucius saw that!!!eeeeeeeehhhh
what is he gonna think?
will he stop pursuing Harry?!?!
I hope not!
I CANNOT WAIT until next friday!!!
update soon and update well!
Toodles!
person ShatteredxDream
schedule August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor Harry. He deserves happiness. Does Lucius know about his son\'s \"lovers\"? I can\'t wait til the next update!
person kaoschan
schedule August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m liking the story quite a bit :D
schedule August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you, all of you, for your kind words. I hate answering these things in the actual story, though I probably should anyhow. This isn\'t really a Lucius/Harry pairing, nor is it really a Harry/Draco one either, which is why I put it in this category. I know the summary leads you to believe that only Lucius and Harry are involved, but I suppose I wanted to slightly mislead...I have no idea. I liked the way it sounded.


As for why they abandoned him, all will be answered later in the story. There are still fourteen more chapters and I promise there will be some explanation as to why they are treating Harry this way. Keep reading!

person musama
schedule August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like the plot of this story. I\'m a fan of the Lucius/Harry pairing but there aren\'t many fics about them out there. Your chapter was funny, I laughed when Severus stepped on the three boys and the way Zabini acts is just... well, funny. The only thing missing though is an explanation as to why Harry\'s friends turned their backs on him. I mean, they are Gryffindors and are loyal no matter what. Ron and Hermione often faced death following Harry. Something major must have happen, no just the gay thing as you said it was accepted in the wizarding world. Perhaps you\'ll explain later. Make them fight!!!! lol
I\'m looking forward to the next chapter. Lucius\'s arrival at school... See you next week.
person myniephoenix
schedule August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
harry is so cute... :) looking forward to the next update..
person Missi
schedule August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG love this fic-can\'t wait for more!!