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for Fine Lines

by squirrelchaser

person Emeraldwolf
schedule September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
:::sniff::: so sad. poor Draco. i really really hope you continue this. :::sniffle:::
person thrnbrooke
schedule September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor Draco! What happens in chapter 5!
person Amessis
schedule September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh no, poor Draco! That must be awful to know his father valued his own life more than his sons. It\'s nice to see Mrs. Weasley being so good to Draco- he needs that more than he probably thinks. I can\'t wait for more of this.
person Amessis
schedule September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very well done! I love this story.
person Raven Lestrange
schedule September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please continue this; it has an excellent plot to it.
person thrnbrooke
schedule September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Need chapter 4! Is it safe for \"Ron\" to be in Hogsmeade w/o someone?
person Dev
schedule August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OO! I really like it so far, very well written and Draco and Harry and all of them aren\'t out of character which I am so glad for! I cant waiiit for more! Your story is awesome and I hope you update soon! :)
person Nairim
schedule August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Keep writing, I\'ll be reading!
person thrnbrooke
schedule August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ron is being vindictive and cruel! Can\'t wait for chapter 3!
person Amessis
schedule August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a brilliant story! I just think someone needs to slap Ron though, and Hermione\'s right behind him. They\'re his parents for gods sake, of course he\'s going to be worried about them!