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for Fine Lines

by squirrelchaser

person the zedmeister
schedule September 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like the respect that Draco shows for Harry in this fic, as well as the fact that there is absolutely no fuss over the fact they\'re both boys, no \"but I\'m not gay!\" angst. It flows naturally and beautifully :)
person XaloneXalwaysX
schedule September 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Holy cheese crackers....marry me. LOL! Wow dude seriously I am REALLY lovin\' your fic. There is GREAT detail and I REEEEEEALLY like how you\'re not rushing Harry and Draco\'s relationship ^_^. Keep writing! I can\'t wait for the next update!
person Amessis
schedule September 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well done! I wonder what she\'s going to make Draco look like?
person Shannon
schedule September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is great, I really love this story. I anxiously await the next chapter, please keep them coming!
person thrnbrooke
schedule September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh I can\'t wait for chapter 7! They almost kissed! And Draco regretted stopping him! More!
person Akusaa
schedule September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This story rocks so much it\'s practically made of granite!

Please update soon, I\'m addicted now and can\'t wait to find out what happens! ^.^
person Amessis
schedule September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can\'t believe he pushed him away! Oh well, here\'s hoping there\'s a next time. I can understand Draco being worried though- what would Harry think knowing he\'d never kissed anyone? It\'s really sweet actually.
person crystal
schedule September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this fic is written so well, and so believably~! :D Love draco~! Can\'t wait to see the development for the H/D bits! Please keep writing!
person thrnbrooke
schedule September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Uh oh! Draco was spotted flying! Did he mean all those things he said to Draco or was it just the potion? Oh I can\'t wait for chapter 6!
person Amessis
schedule September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! Poor Draco though- can\'t believe they did that to him. I\'d be pissed off too. More please.