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for Fine Lines

by squirrelchaser

person FigmentedReality
schedule January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
=[. Now that was just depressing. I'm freakin' depressed. AAHH!!!!

Nice story though. I can't even string together a decent enough review. AAHH!!
person FigmentedReality
schedule January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
And don't listen to Chaser1. It seriously is a good story.

S/He isn't even brace enough to put his/her e-mail for debate.

Now that is what you call a loser.

Am I right? =].
person chaser1
schedule October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I was starting to like this fic, until I realized it is just another one of an endless series of draco-bashing. You just like to humiliate draco endlessly, by weasly or the twins or whoever.

Your entire plot just consists of incidents to humiliate draco. It is not funny or entertaining at all. It gets to the point where i skim the pages just to get to the next humiliation. You could be very much better than this, but you will never be because you have no imagination and no creativity, your just copying other authors in their humiliation kicks, you should go back to reading, which will not tax your infinitesimally scarce creativity.

Humiliated enough, you might feel like your draco does
person Meara Jayne
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story! I don\'t read a lot of H/D, but I liked this a lot. Very heart-wrenching at the end. So good!!
person migihayami
schedule October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It was so fucking sad! I am as the same opinion as your fic, because I really think Harry is one of orcruxes
person evil windstar
schedule October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
what a wonderful story! especially post-HBP. u captured draco\'s sentiments about his parents perfectly.
though the end was rather ambigious, i just hope he isn\'t going to kill snape
person thrnbrooke
schedule October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh I\'m heartbroken! I didn\'t want Harry to die! And I don\'t want this to end!!!
person Kyande
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Augh, this made me cry harder than any other fic I\'ve ever read. But it was so goooood. This was a fabulous read. Amazing.
person thrnbrooke
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Did Draco do it? Did he kill Harry and then Voldemort? Oh I need chapter 11! I\'ve gotta know!
person ura
schedule October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Is Harry truly dead? How sad. But the idea of Harry is a Horcrux makes sense.