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for The Heirs of Heaven and Hell

by kensethgirl17

schedule January 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
more more MORE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!! >__< i ewant to know what happens?? i hate that good fics get forgotten by their authors.....pls comeback!!!T_T
schedule November 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ahhh!!more more more more please!!!!!!!!!
schedule July 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm, I like it so far, and I guess I'm waiting for the next chapter.
person Anon
schedule July 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story is so slow paced.
person pothead
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
although some parts of the story confuses me your story is very much interesting.
i want more. i\'m kinda hooked. :P
person Acid Quill
schedule October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This might be a good story, however it has at least two of the marks of \'bad\' fiction. Your grammar needs work, and a/n in the middle of the story are distracting, irritating and unnecessary. I think it\'s great that you\'ve tackled such a complex subject matter, and are playing with the characters, but with all the errors and the a/n, it\'s impossible to read.
person thrnbrooke
schedule October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sneaky plan! I can\'t wait for chapter 19! Who is Siena? Her eyes were royal purple streaked with amber?
person PW
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is an excellent story. It always manages to catch my attention and get me excited.
person anneth10
schedule October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I haven\'t went in this site for a long time and after reading your fic.. I actually resented doing so.. your fic is awesome.. one which I won\'t find in Fanfiction.net(is this true).. anyways. good luck in writing and hopefully you wil updatesoon
person thrnbrooke
schedule October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Harry plans to kill Draco and Blaise still intends to have him one way or another. Poor Draco. Can\'t wait for chapter 18!