rate_review Reviews

hello there!! hmm...this was a good start for your first fic! easy to imagine in your head. one suggestion though, pleeease space the paragraphs with \'enter\' between them so it\'s easier to read! i know i\'m not the only one who will decide not to read the story if all the paragraphs are smushed togeather...>.>;;; *sweatdrops* i mean, it could be the best fic in the world, and i\'d never know \'cause it hurts my eyes to strain them by trying to figure out where i\'m reading *mutteres about weak eyes* but other than that, i expect that you\'ll be able to do great things in the future with this story!

~Okubyo Uzumaki

Oh I can\'t wait for chapter 4! What was with the look? What will Dumbledore say?

Think Harry is becoming a sex starved teenager! Can\'t wait for chapter 3! Voldemort was standing in the Forbidden Forest? Why? What does he have planned for Harry?

Interesting beginning! I can\'t wait for chapter 2!