rate_review Reviews

Strangely enough, I dont find Harry acting this way out of character. He\'s always been this rather quiet, not really outspoken kind of kid, so throw him into a position like that, all this male \'meanyness\' comes out. It seems something like that would happen. The only people who really piss him off are people that really just know how to piss people off. Later

Oh yeah... With Harry talking like THAT, how can anyone fall in love?

I wouldn\'t mind if you included Ginny a bit.... but please, no threesome!
I think it would also be very, very funny - and scandalous - if Narcissa got pregnant with Harry\'s kid! I\'d LOVE to see the expression on Draco\'s face, LOL. Not to mention what the rest of the wizarding world would say if that came out... it would be wonderful :D :D :D

Even though using the actual words \"penis\" and \"vagina\" suits the scene since its practically a relationship straight out of a porno film, it was weird. Poor Ginny.. If she ever catches wind of this.. Ooooo... Lookin good so far!

This fic is great man...hope you can finish it. The best het Harry/not Hr or G at least. Most(if not all) good Harry/other than G/Hr are abandoned. This damn site has 99% slash fics... Does it have to be Ginny for that rescue vehicle... i hate H/G...

Hurray for Harry and Narcissa, hurray for hidden lovenasiums in the girls\' toilet!

accolades:
I love this story; it\'s one of three that I can\'t find anything in it I would change. I hope to read much more of your stuff.

predictions/suggestions:
Since the Malfoys are in hidding I wonder what will happen when/if Harry goes back to Hogwarts. The one good scenario I can think of is long term separations of Narcissa and Harry leading to explosions of hormones and lust whenever Harry visits his house. This would also give Draco the freedom to work out a way to do something stupid in the hopes of keeping his mum from Harry.

In the castle is another promising aspect with Myrtle. She practically guards the Chamber of Secrets and even though Ginny made it past her numerous times and Harry has an invisibility cloak to help him through, I would still like to see problems arise from this.

Lastly, I hope Narcissa gets to put it to Harry. You have a wand so use it. Bind him, strap it on and bend him over! Teach him a thing or two about unlawful entry.

closing statement:
Bye. I\'ll be back to comment again after a while. Just don\'t make them do something pathetic while I\'m gone, like fall in love. Okay?

Just want to tell you great story so far. Harry, however has to stop taking the POO-POO! No means NO. I read your story again so I could see if Harry put up much of a struggle or said No to Narcissa when she came into his room and I did not read that, so its not the same. He was overwhelmed.

You really dont need to bring in Ginny to soften up Harry. Speaking for myself, I can see why Harry is acting the way he is. He is finally has control of one aspect of his life and whether it is good or bad he\'s going with it, he has to have someone to take his frustrations out on and you have put Narcissa at his mercy, so to speak by making it clear that she has nothing, nowhere to go and she has to keep Draco safe. Narcissa really can\'t do anything to him either, if she hexes him or curses him or anything she \'s out the house and left to the mercy of the order and Voldemort! You\'ve got her hemmed in pretty good. That\'s the only reason she hasn\'t done anything, Right! She\'s got to be more powerful than Harry and some of the other members in the house!

However, Harry does need to realize that he can not keep forcing himself on her when she clearly states no. They don\'t need to fall in love with eachother but they need to respect eachother and the situation that they have allowed themselves to get into. What about contraception! She can still get pregnant, she is young enough!


Having said all of that, I have enjoyed your story and hope you continue. You have done a great job so far.

simply lovely story. There hasnt been such a good, plain sex story featuring harry in a long time. Really glad you have taken up the task and doing quite an admrable job. Congrats. Really looking forward to more chapters and more sex...=). Also, just as a suggestion, the sex scenes are very good but you might want to include some more variety in it to make it even better. Anways... keep up the good work!!!

I think bringing Ginny in much later may be ok. I want to see what is going to happen between Harry and Narcissa, especially if more people find out about them. I know you said there are no feelings of love between them, but they are getting something they need from each other. Keep up the good writing.

Great story. Please update soon.