rate_review Reviews

Dizzam. I forgot about this story. It must have disappeared amongst the wave of crap of stories among this site.

It's an even better read after reading Deathly Hallows.

I loved the way you described the course of the droplets, rather than go through that usual mundane act of sex. Two thumbs up and all stars.

Okay. Looking back on your previous author's notes, I just wanted to make a revision. I don't think you should try so hard to make the readers agree on this "platonic" relationship aspect of Narc/Harry's, instead I believe you should plainly display it as purely sexual; a fetish; repressed fantasy; lust. Narcissa, if there ever was a woman in the Harry Potter world, is the perfect candidate for a wife without a husband. Sure they are bonded by marriage and name, but he rarely ever touches her and never does he last longer than to satisfy his own needs. She's his trophy wife, perhaps not in the way presently thought of, as an image of sexual conquest, but as a social standing. Her family is one of the oldest bloodlines in the wizarding world, that is uncontestable, and when Lucius took her as his bride, he gained the respect of not only his fellows but his rivals. But with their union, as well, Narcissa's sex life became dormant to near vacant. She took this in stride though as the duty of a noblewoman, and with pride kept her own wantings secret. Going to a prostitute would be below her, a disgrace, and having a secret lover would be an insult to her position. Not only that but it would be dangerous given the number of eyes on her everyday. So when, while on the run, given santuary by her enemies, an unexpected event like this came along, where she, drunk and unknowing, took a lover, and her chastity impeding her, cracked. And now she can't explain why, when the boy is not only a boy, but her husband's enemy, yet she can't stop thinking, urging for their next encounter, practically feeling his press against her even when he's not there. Her sexual repression is leaking and now its practically near the breaking point. That's what I see happening and I can't wait to see the reprecussions of her loss of control.

Till next time... adios.

good story

Are you ever going to finish this story or update? I check by ever so often and this is getting annoying.

I\'m Harry/Narcissa OTPer convert lol.

I hope you do finish this fic.

Are you going to finish this story?

Great story so far... would definitively love more.
What happens when school starts? What about Draco? What will Ron and Hermione think? Could Narcissa accidently become pregnant?
Keep up the *great* work!

I hope you can continue this story because I was intrigued by Harry\'s dark sise and he\'s holding his own with Narcassia. Keep going you got it right!!!

She should get one up on him by getting pregnant with is child, then he would have to take care of her.