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for Pretense

by ladycat

person Harleyd
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh no! I just realized this is the last draco/harry story! I should have savored them instead of reading them all at once! Well I liked this one - it was a little more directly dominant harry than in the other stories - i like that. Can\'t wait to read more from you!
person moidy
schedule August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
loved it. i especially liked your first paragraph, i\'ve never understood how people can taste like food unless they\'re eating at the same time >__< lol i also liked the part about the bruises, mainly because i like the little accidental bruises i sometimes get from everyday like (knocking into things mainly i\'m such a clutz) anyway i hope you update and if its just a one-shot then i loved it anyway.
moidy
person Xtreme17nc13
schedule August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was...hot. I love when H/D sex is so..meaningless. I think its better that way. Great Job. Toodlez! --Ashlee
person thrnbrooke
schedule August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Intense!