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for Talented Tongues

by ladyicondraco

person thrnbrooke
schedule August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A high claim? Did Harry listen carefully to the discriptions? If he did he wouldn\'t have to ask what Draco meant by possess him. Oh I can\'t wait for chapter 3! Who corners Neville? Blaise?
person myniephoenix
schedule August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh my..... oh my oh my oh my.... update again soon... :)
person eternity_101
schedule August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sounds good to me! so let\'s get on with the show! I\'m just looking forward for the next chapter
person acr
schedule August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Really interesting start. The Illuminati...with snakes. I like the way you write Draco. Your preview of ch. 2 was also funny. What kind of cake do you like?
person acr
schedule August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yummy chap. But I think Harry is being a teensy bit too...accepting? Submissive?
person LadyX
schedule August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ohhh MORE!!! What was up with Pansy and Millicent? They dont normally attack that way. They are the word hurters as I call them. Come on every one chant with me!! *Chants louldy then dies down pitifully* DRACO WANTS HARRY Draco wants Harry Draco wan-- ok then fine we wont chant. Cant wait for more.
person YamiNoWedge
schedule August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like it! Update soon! Tomorrow would be good. Right now would be best.
person Dean\'s Darling
schedule August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting! Very interesting. I love the concept. It is fresh and original, and your execution of it is supurb. One suggestion, don\'t make Harry so accepting of everything. When he allowed Draco to straddle him and pierce him without a second thought, I had a little trouble with that. Please let me knkow when you update. Again, Good Job!
DD
person >> Genard jk
schedule August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HOLY FUCK THATS HOTT
person Dezra
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Who? When? Why? What? Need more to find out where this is going. sounds interesting so far.