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eh, this chapter (ch 3) has allready been posted some days ago... did you fix something with it or is ch 4 on the way but I clicked to fast? *confused*

WOW!!! I can soooo see Snape as a Serpants King. That was excellent!! I'm sooo loving this story! Please update ASAP!!!!

OOh Good twist

snape, king!

who'd of thought what with him being horrible and all.
if he is the king then surely he cud of over ruled draco with the claim and still torment hary couldnt he?

oh well

please let me know when you update and update soon

PLEASE

Sarah

Okay, you have got to update soon because if you don't I think I'll just DIE!
I can't believe Snape's the King. I thought it would be Lucius because Draco's the prince and I thought because of this that automatically made Lucius King. Guess I was wrong.

*Looks frantically for next chapter button* I... wow. Brilliant, interesting, original... very well done over all. A lot of fic authors try at having the characters act like themselves, but fail at even having them as different characters. They all act the same, and everything... they just have different names. You, however, have succeeded in having your characters in character but fitting in with your plot. I'm in love with your Draco, though I must say I'm interested in your Neville/Blaise relationship as well. Oh, and of course, in the King. And I don't mean Elvis. Great job!

Interesting, i am quite enjoying this Fic please update as soon as possible.

very interesting. I just found the story and i'm hooked

A fascinating story. You've got an interesting AU going. Now...one thing I have to point out is the "one-off" names: Millicent Baulstrode should be Bulstrode (that's the one that really gets me) and Hogsmeade has an "e" at the end. [www.hp-lexicon.org (you'll be able to use the "Which Witch" section to double-check names.)]

http://www.hp-lexicon.org/wizards/wizards_list.html
http://www.hp-lexicon.org/atlas/atlas.html
http://www.hp-lexicon.org/w_spells.html

Oh I can't wait to read more, so up-date really soon.

Elle the Evil one

OMG!!! I can't wait for chapter 4! Welcome back! Hope all is well! Severus Snape is the Serpent King? Gotta have more!