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for D.A. Forever

by Superhacker

schedule June 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great start, and with my fave pairing too. XD
schedule August 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was a very good first chapter! I look forward to the next!
schedule April 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Only one chapter? I want this one to continue, actually. It was an awesome set-up, and I'd love to see you take this one to completion.
person Anon
schedule November 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Not bad, not bad.
Interesting pairing, I'll admit and you pull of both characters very well.
A few more chapters would make me happy. ;)
schedule October 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please finish this fic! I love the Neville/Luna ship but so few people write about them!
schedule October 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I liked this very much. Please, finnish it.
person AmandaD
schedule September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good! Please Finish!!
person Cody
schedule September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahh, this was sweet. The first time Neville appeared (\"I suppose focusing on the pictures in front of them helps keep away the ones floating through their heads,\" Neville Longbottom mused as he left the common room.) seemed just slightly off to me, since I \"musing\" is not something I would associate with Neville. But your Luna voice is practically perfect, as is the rest of your Neville. You should definitely keep writing.
person The Red Queen
schedule August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A sweet story, & the characters are very much themselves; I\'d like to see more of this!