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January 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
please continue!!! dont let people get you down! there are plenty more who like this than not. i almost stopped my story bc of too much criticism. just get a beta to help and you will be fine! i want more!
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October 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i really like this story so far would love to know when u finish it
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September 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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July 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it, but Hermione appearance changes make her not Hermione. The story is no longer believable.
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November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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February 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was so good
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August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
cool
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August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It\'s not a bad beginning; It has the beginnings of a plot, and it has the potential to go far. However, it needs to have longer chapters, and the spelling needs to be fixed. The story title isn\'t even spelled correctly. It\'s \'Referrences\'.
If you can fix those few things, the story would flow a lot better and be easier to read. That\'s all I have to offer for suggestions.
Blessed be,
-Kat
If you can fix those few things, the story would flow a lot better and be easier to read. That\'s all I have to offer for suggestions.
Blessed be,
-Kat
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August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you fail at life....there are no details that stand out....
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August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
like Anon said, there is just too many Snape is Hermione\'s real father kindof thing going around...i hope that there is something new in here and something totally unexpected...
and i have to agree with cope, her middle name is Jane...it says so in the book (or so i\'m told, i\'ve nevere really looked it up myself)
and on another note, there wasn\'t anything that really popped out at me and made me want to read more...the make of the story didn\'t make me want to really read the story...the basic story behind the words is good but the words didn\'t have much color...
and i have to agree with cope, her middle name is Jane...it says so in the book (or so i\'m told, i\'ve nevere really looked it up myself)
and on another note, there wasn\'t anything that really popped out at me and made me want to read more...the make of the story didn\'t make me want to really read the story...the basic story behind the words is good but the words didn\'t have much color...