rate_review Reviews

A fun story, but I'm really disspointed with the fact that you again cast Snape as the letcherous perv, putting his own desires so far ahead of anything else that he'd hurt Draco... Didn't you cover that already in yor other 2 stories? It would be more interesting if you developed the character in a new way for a new story, not just repeated your old, well-covered, representation of him.
Other than that - a good tale. I like your Draco, and I appreciated the realism of the sex.

I find it amusing that while my characterisations of Harry and Draco and them getting together didn't change between the two stories, that someone would expect that I'd see Snape as reacting differently to the situation. I guess given my reading of canon, I have a hard time understanding why anyone would think that Snape doesn't put his own desires ahead of what's right. This is the guy that hates on an 11-year-old abused kid because his father was mean to him. This is the guy that discontinued Occlumency lessons because he was angry with someone half his age. Sorry, he's not a nice man. He's still one of my favourite characters, however, and I write him as I see him. Towards the end, Remus tried to explain what was going on with Snape, there were several allusions to why he was behaving as he did. I'm sorry if you find it formulaic, but I'm rather enamoured with the idea of a conflicted man acting in less-than-ideal ways. It's how I see him, just as I see Draco as redeemable and as I see Harry as a well-meaning dork who often doesn't look very deeply into things beyond his own snap judgments. I guess that happens a lot.

I hope this is not the end. I've been following this fic for so long. I definitely don't want it come to an end. Will Harry and Draco get married?

is that the end?

Wow! Is that the end? Great chapter! =o)

Nevermind... Didn't notice the *complete* there. =o) Great story! Thanks for writing! =o)

I hope this isn't the end because I don't want it to be! I hope there's a chapter 14!

Hello!

Firstly, thanks so much for being such a regular updater! I'm absolutely in love with you Lupin, and also your Narcissa. It's been great reading this wonderful fic, and I'm glad that I was introduced to the Draco/Harry fandom just in time for your story.

The way you ended with the words of the title was really clever, and such a naughty ending it was! Showing up Snape, exhibitionism, those boys are definitely kinky!

Finally, the way Harry stopped Draco from saying the words was touching. The story has been so sweet, and I'd like to thank you heaps for it. Peace!

Love, me.

Yay!

I've been reading squick fic all day and you have no idea how excited I was to read a story with a happy ending! I loved the scene of showing up Snape- haha on him. I love Harry teasing Draco - especially about luvin Ron, heh.

But more importantly I *adore* that you had Harry stop Draco before he said the words, that Harry knew what Draco felt and didn't need the words.

Fantastic story! Made me all kinds of happy!

I loved that! Well done.