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i know you have a life, but i don't, so please update!!!!!!!

OMG U MUST UPTADE SOON!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!! ur an awesome writer!!! Please continue!!!

I recomended this fanfiction in portkey, because this is MARVELOUS!!!! I love this story, and I discovered almost now (what a coincidence, because there is no coincidence in this world) Anyway, congratulations for your excellent work, one of the best fanfiction in 2005 year!!!

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telmie

I've been watching for an update on this for way too long, and it made me very happy to finally have my vigilance rewarded. I love fics that start out with a physical relationship that (hopefully!) works up to a romantic relationship, and this is the best H/Hr I've ever read like it. Harry is perfect; equal parts mystery and passion, and Hermione is also perfect in her understanding and acceptance, despite overanalyzing and being generally brilliant. The story is developing slowly and interestingly, though I wish I had it all at one time to read! I'm hoping to see my favorite scenario combined with my favorite type of story--long, detailed novel-length intricately plotted, etc. And to give a bit of constructive criticism, you could do with a beta reader. The writing is very well-done, but there are a few grammatical errors that get in the way now and again. I can't wait for the next chapter; hope I don't have to wait as long this time! :D

This is a great ff!! And another beautiful chapter btw!
There are many things I liked, you are doing a great job with the characters! I can feel the emotion in them: Harry is il love with her, not just "in lust" ^__^
But what it means the last phrase?

*Girlish sigh* Breathtaking plot, dialogue and romance. There simply aren't enough words to compliment this great story.

I LUV this fic!!!! Please o please o please update soon!!!!!

OMG!! This is the most gorgeous FF (HH or not, lemon or not) that I've ever read!!

Yes, I think the sex scenes are really caliente! but the story itself is beautifull allright. I love those little things and details that are making Harry and Hermione need each other gradually. Every single chapter has something special and beautiful. I can't wait to know who's stalking Herms or what's going on with harry. Please, continue soon, you just got yourself another devoted reader (not that you need another one).

TLAL

omg is Alfred or what ever his name the stalker !!! I cant take it i need to read more it like 3:30 in the morning and I need to read I never thought I hear myself say those words!! lol love it need it update soon !!

please post the next chapters....