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August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this was a good story!!!
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August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What the shit is this, asscakes?
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August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it was good
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August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ummm wow maybe this story would be decent if you took a writing class that was a piece of crap.
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August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good
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August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
cool
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August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sorry, but this story is shit. The formating sucks.
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August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Suggestion: PUNCTUATION! Look into it. And while you\'re doing that, hit the damn spellcheck button.
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August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Umm.. it\'s good.. just a bit confusing you know? Everything in paragraphs like that, no quotations marks (\") Try also editing a bit better, more than a few gramatical mistakes and spelling...
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August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think myb story is good so far butg I will be adding on soon