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for Big Name Death Eater

by Shiv5468

person Catpower
schedule September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is so amusing - I\'m enjoying it a lot BUT why did you not provide a lemon when the scene was set and you told us they did it anyway?
person Morrigan
schedule September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! I\'ve always enjoyed Hermione/Snape fics, but this one is clever and still light and humourous without being banal or trite. Thanks for such an engrossing and witty look at my two favourite characters!
person Moi
schedule September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Splendidly, deliciously funny. I particularly enjoyed the swearing, and the resulting assessment of Snape swearing. It\'s all very good. (Sorry, arthritis in my left hand prevents me from reaching the exclamation point.)
person tamargrl
schedule September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is bloody fantastic. Hilarious! You do write a good story, and a parody such as this definitely deserves a good writer. rock on!

And feel free to mock us Americans and our slang/sayings. Cuz the British ones are hilarious to us.
person Moi
schedule September 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Once again, loved it. The Even More Potente Potions was fabulous, as was his editorial comment about Pince. The explanation of the offside rule, the couch scene, all splendid. Looking forward to the next chapter!
person Catpower
schedule September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hilarious. What a great ending to chapter 2. Sev doesn\'t ask girls to go out with them - he gets their bosses to order them to do so, hahaha. He is a bastard, but irresistable. I hope Hermione gives him a really hard time and finds a way to force him to make the appropriate romantic gestures, whether he wants to or not, prior to their inevitable shagging (or, at least I HOPE the shagging is inevitable).
person Moi
schedule September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I could have sworn I\'d read chapter one, but it might have been one of those times my Explorer quit without any explanation. So this evening I read both chapters. I must admit, this is the first fan fic I\'ve ever considered reading to my husband, because I thought he would find it funny. I actually guard the fact that I read stuff on this site very closely. I doubt he\'d Approve of some of the stories. Anyway, I can\'t wait for chapter three, now, so onward and upward!
person DawnEB
schedule September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hehehe. The Goons as Death Eaters :D I can\'t wait to tell my husband - he might even read it! (He doesn\'t read HP fanfics, there is always some other reason he is stood at my shoulder.)

I\'m loving this story, and look forward to the next chapter.
person maggie
schedule August 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story, in fact I enjoy the way you tell story\'s in general. I love your portral of Snape, its just so great. I like how you do Hermione.... it\'s smart, as it should be, but not stuffy. Anyhow I look forward to readmore mopre of this story.
Magie
person lizski
schedule August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant! Absolutely brilliant (of course, what else would I expect from you!)! I am SO looking forward to more of this. And thanks for pointing me in the right direct on \'it started with a book\'. You really make Severus such a likeable guy!