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I WAS going to MYST this fic, but the fact that I would have to read it a second time around chilled me to the bone. Your beta must be typing the story for you; the first chapter is oh-so-different than the others. Also, can I remind you, you\'re confusing LUST with LOVE, you misspell Hermione\'s name every single time, and you\'re overlooking huge HP logic?

1. Dumbledore said specifically that although Sirius left the house to Harry, it isn\'t safe to go in.
2. It\'s stated in EVERY SINGLE BOOK that you can\'t dissapparate/apparate inside of Hogwarts.
3. ...Malfoy is on Voldemort\'s side, willing or not. Do I really have to say any more on that subject?


In summary, this fic = TOTAL AND UTTER BRAIN-MELT. IT\'S SAFER TO GO READ THE ARTEMIS FOWL MPREG FICS, FOR KAM\'S SAKE.

Almost feel sorry for Ron. Don\'t trust how he came around so fast. Can\'t wait for chapter 4!

Oh my! I can\'t wait for chapter 3! I\'m sooo glad you didn\'t put Harry and Ron together for long. They\'re like brothers. Wonder what Draco was thinking?

Ok :) ill carry on writing it.. and i dont know what a beta is o_0

HeHe... sorry o_0 i just got a beta thats helping me out, all the next chapters will be better and proper grammer :D

not a bad start please continue this!i know i will enjoy it!

awww, Harry\'s in love...and by the looks of it, Draco might be too . Love it.

There were parts that I thought could have been written a bit better grammaticaly speaking... but I think that you\'re getting off to a good start ^__^ Keep it up!

i understand its your first fanfic but have you considered getting a beta? i think it would help alot if you did.

I really want to read your fic, but I can\'t bring myself to do it until you have someone beta the summary. You most have forgotten which of the \"they\'re, their, and there\" you should use. I\'ll give you a hint \"there\" is the wrong one.