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August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 3/2 - I hope you update frequently!! This is great, but I have too many questions - what has Hermione been doing, did Hadrian want to meet his father sooner and what did she say, did Hermione forbid Harry and Ron from saying bad things about Severus (they must know it\'s Severus\'s son since Hadran\'s name has been Snape since age five), has she been dating others ... and where\'s the next chapter!!!
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August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You have caught my interest totally. This has been a really strong beginning to your story and I\'m looking forward to reading it. I must state here though that I have already written the ending to your story. LOL I\'ll be waiting to see if yours is the same as mine. Thanks for sharing your story with us.
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August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOVE IT!!! This is great! LOVE IT! Stands on its own. Hufflepuff!! Love it!!
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August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Let\'s sincerely hope that in this case the sins of the father are not revisited on the son... This is a very fun set up and premise, and Hermione\'s defense is already in place. He told her he wanted nothing more to do with her. Boy, I\'m already eager to see what you do with this next... and HUFFLEPUFF! Brilliant!
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August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
\'he fainted\' - I laughed so loud my Mother-in-Law\'s cat fell off the window sill. I like the choice of name too - I don\'t think I\'ve seen that Emporer\'s name used in a fanfic before, but it fits in well with Severus\'s own.
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August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is good! Poor Severus! When is he going to find out that he\'s hermione\'s son? Looking forward to reading the next chapter!
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August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You had me until Snape fainted. Very OOC, IMO. Also, I seriously doubt Hermione would have given her child the Father\'s last name without even informing him of said childs existence. However, I applaud you on a an excellent choice for a first name, \"Hadrian\".
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August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it! I love it! I love it! Snape fainting, hilarious!!! Wow, I wasn\'t expecting such a large jump in time. This is going to be a very interesting story! Can\'t wait for more updates! As soon as possible, por favor, mi chicquita?! I checked out your previous story as well- quite good! Happy writing! Tengo que irme! Salud! Your eagerly awaiting reader, Killer K :p
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August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That is awesome...Snape fainted! Sweet! I can\'t wait for the next chapter.
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August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can\'t see what I\'m writing so I hope this works ok. Anyways, I like this story a lot. I hope you get the next chapter fast because I can\'t wait to hear the rest.