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for Outside the Potions Classroom

by HappilyJaded

person Bambu
schedule August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think Snape\'s response to Hermione\'s recitation is entirely within character... he\'s angry, hurt, and does what he knows best... he strikes back while holding tight to his illusions. In this case, that it wasn\'t he who\'d ended the relationship without the possibility of a future. If he ever considers her perspective, he will realize that she was only a teenager who\'d had an illicit affair with a man who didn\'t love her. What else was she really to do? I\'m a bit surprised that her parents, being older and a bit wiser, didn\'t counsel that Snape had the right to know he\'d fathered a child. I\'ll be interested to see what happens when he speaks with Hadrian, and just how vindictive you want to take him. The courts in my state are filled with parents who use their children as pawns to hurt the other parent.
person Killer Kadoogan
schedule August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What a treasure! I love the struggle Snape is having with all this! I really hope he and Hermoine get together for some post-affair shagging(hint, hint). Keep up the great writing, mi chica! Killer K :)
person firewall
schedule August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What a great piece of introspection Snape took in this chapter. Well done! I can\'t wait to read the particulars of the meeting. Thanks for sharing your story.
person Ruby Jade
schedule August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YOU HAVE TO UPDATE THIS STORY

I\"M DYING TO SEE WHAT HE SAYS LOL
person June W
schedule August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 4/3 - I hope Hadrian doesn\'t hold it against Severus that he never saw him before - \'cuz he didn\'t know about him. Poor Severus, it really isn\'t fair that Harry and Ron and everyone else knew about Hadrian before he did. So he\'s going to see Hadrian the next day in class - and all Hadrian\'s housemates are probably already asking him if he\'s related to Professor Snape because of his name. Hermione really was cutting things close, to not tell Severus sooner! Please update soon.
person Jenn
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, what a line..

person Jordin
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i really enjoyed this series. the whole snape having a kid and not knowing about it was kinda interesting and now i want to know how it all boils down.
person bobbie
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh this is good, I cant wait to read more.
I have been reading your work so far, and have to say,,,very good indeed.
that lat sentence made me laugh. I can just picture Snape with that expression. lmao.
please post more soon.
person PurestBlood
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOL this is good, keep up the great work & update ASAP!
person mary
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is getting really good! Poor Sev how is he going to explain to dumbledore? Looking forward to reading the next chapter!