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for Outside the Potions Classroom

by HappilyJaded

person cat
schedule August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i really like the story, it is very well written, please update and continue. i thought the events of chapter 8 (9) were so strange that hermione would allow snape his every demand without even much of a fight, considering the prelude story. but still i really like it , i hope that you go into more detail to explain why she is so willing, i mean seeing your son, who you love undyingly for only for a couple of weeks ever other year is very harsh even if it is fair. nevertheless please continue your story i am excited to see what you do next with it !
person Ruby Jade
schedule August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really love seeing this story updated. The plot gets a little more in depth and a little more fun with every new chapter. Please continue with this story and though I will be sad to see it end....when you are finished please keep writing new stories for this pairing.
person jenn
schedule August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Keep it going!! I am enjoying this alot! I love the little banter....please tell me more little snapes are in the future?
person christy
schedule August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You have GOT to update this fic!!!! Don\'t leave me hanging too long!! ;-)
person Killer Kadoogan
schedule August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good to hear that chapter 9 will be up so soon! \'Nother great chappie! Care to give a little hint- will things be heating up any time soon? Hmmm??? I just can\'t stand it! I would have jumped his bones right away! Hope your roomie will leave you alone for awhile so you can get down to some serious writing! Doesn\'t she realize how desperate I am for more updates?! As always- happy writing, mi chicquita! Tengo que irme! Salud!
Hugs and kisses!
Killer K :)
person Halcyon
schedule August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am enjoying this story, but I have a question for you. If Severus will have Hadrian for all of his summer holidays, when will Hermione have any time with him? That only leaves 3 or 4 Christmas holidays and the odd visit to Hogwarts for her to see him in the next 7 years.
person PurestBlood
schedule August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!! I love the confrontation between Herm & Sev. Poor Herm I think she ment well, but she should have told Sev. I hope you update ASAP! I realy wan\'t to know what happens next!! :D Good Luck
person June W
schedule August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 9/8 - how has Hadrian been earning galleons?? Doesn\'t Harry want to have kids of his own? I hope Severus doesn\'t blow it with Hadrian in the next conversation by trying to turn him against Hermione; surely, Severus knows about Hufflepuff loyalty. Maybe they can make potions together - part of what Hermione calls \"extra tutoring\" but also father-son time. Does Hadrian have friends by now? Thanks for the new chapter!!
person jan
schedule August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed the story immensely and am really hoping you will update soon. The boy seems so nice, snape too its good!
person Hypatia
schedule August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please tell me these two get together. Give us some smut, please!!!